My Saw Fan Ficton
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My Saw Fan Ficton
Dr. Gordon: Eeeehhhh.... hh....have....2....get....out....ov.... hh....here!!!!
Dr. Gordon tries 2 stay alive and tries whatever he can 2 find a way out. He then c's a foot in a puddle of blood.
Dr. Gordon: Dddd....Detective Tapp! Gggg....g....ge....get....up. Wwww....we....have....2....get out ov....here.
He then saw a bullet hole in his stomach. He new right away he was dead.
Dr. Gordon: O....mmmm....my....god!!!!
Just then, he heard Adam yelling.
Adam: AAAAHHHH!!!! AAAAHHHH!!!! NNNNOOOO!!!! NNNNOOOO!!!! DON'T!!!! DON'T!!!! AAAAHHHH!!!!
Voice: GAME OVER!!!!
Dr. Gordon: ADAM!? ADAM!?
Dr. Gordon had then heard some1 coming. He hid in a dark shadow.
Dr. Gordon:(whispering) How.... is....Zep still....alive!?
Then the man he and Adam had been in the bathroom with had been walking past him even tho he was dead.
Dr. Gordon:(saying in his mind) JOHN!? HE'S JIGSAW!!!!
He didn't no if he should go back 4 Adam or go and try 2 get help. He went back 4 Adam.
He had opened the door and tried 2 reach the light swich.
Adam: Lawrence?
Dr. Gordon: It's.... me.
Adam: Lawrence, u have 2 go get some1. Hurry up!!!!
Dr. Gordon: Jig....saw.... is the....person.... I told u.... about.
Adam: The 1 who has 1 year 2 live?
Dr. Gordon: Yea. Wwww....where's.... Zep's gun?
Adam: Over there.
Dr. Gordon gets the gun and goes 2 the door.
Dr. Gordon:Aaaa.... Adam.... remember.... if I don't....come back....I'll bleed 2 death.
Adam:U promise, if u get help, u'll come back 4 me?
Dr. Gordon: I....wouldn't lie....2 u. I....promise.
Adam: Wait, Lawrence. Give me that hacksaw u used.
Dr. Gordon: Wwhh....why?
Adam: I'll cut my foot off.
Dr. Gordon: U....sure?
Adam: ....yea. If u die before me, I don't want u 2 be alone. So I'll die next 2 u.
Adam then starts 2 cut threw his foot. Soon, it was off.
Adam: AAAAHHHH!!!!
Dr. Gordon: Cccc....come....on....Adam.
Adam: Right be....hind u.
They then find the ladder 2 get out. Dr. Gordon then realizes that their blood will come out ov them if they stood up. They start 2 go another way and find some stairs and a door that was open above.
Adam: I'll....go 1st. Stay behind me....and I'll pull u up....as we go.
They reach the top and found what looked like a tiny library/studyroom.
Adam: Great. It's like.... I'm in....highschool again.
They look and find a big metal door thats open. They look out and saw Jigsaw looking at a set of keys trying 2 find the 1 2 the jail-like door. Dr. Gordon shoots him in the foot and Adam gets the keys.
Adam: Got....it. Llll....let's get moven.
Dr. Gordon then shoots Jigsaw in the foot again.
Dr. Gordon: Iiii.... I'll let....u....live....ur....final year....alive.
They get out ov the house. Jigsaw only saw Dr. Gordon. He didn't even no Adan got out.
Then, a car drives by and the person calls 911.
Adam: Llll....Lawrence.... we did it.
Dr. Gordon: I....don't....think....I'll....make....it. I'm....dying....right....now.
Adam: NO! WE....MADE IT....THIS FAR.... AND WE'RE GOING 2.... MAKE IT 2.... THE HOSPITAL.... AND WE'LL LIVE!!!!
Dr. Gordon starts closing his eyes slowly. Adam then starts doing it as well. An ambulance arrived.
1 MONTH LATER
Adam: Wwww....where am I? Where's Lawrence?
Nurse: Don't worry Mr. Michaelson, Dr. Gordon is allright. Speaken of which, u have visitor.
Dr. Gordon had walked in on cruches.
Dr. Gordon: Hi Adam.
Adam: Lawrence!!!! Ur allright. What about Jigsaw, is he in jail?
Dr. Gordon: I hate 2 tell u this but, the driver who saw us just checked 2 c if we were allright and called the police. We didn't say anything 2 her about Jigsaw. He escaped. No1 no's where he is. But at least we know that it's John. I woke up just hours after we got out. U slipped into a coma. U lost more blood then I did. We went back 2 the house and cing how Jigsaw didn't no u escaped, we put a fake dead body with the same cloths u were wearing where u were chained.
Adam: And Zep?
Dr. Gordon: We just left him. Unfortunetly 4 me, I cut a certain part in my foot that I couldn't get it surgecly put back on. Fortunetly 4 u, I was able 2 put ur's back on.
Adam: U put it back on?
Dr. Gordon: Yep. But 4 now, always watch ur back, Jigsaw's still out there.
Adam: But not 4 long. Soon, 4 him it will be, Game Over.
			
			
									
									Dr. Gordon tries 2 stay alive and tries whatever he can 2 find a way out. He then c's a foot in a puddle of blood.
Dr. Gordon: Dddd....Detective Tapp! Gggg....g....ge....get....up. Wwww....we....have....2....get out ov....here.
He then saw a bullet hole in his stomach. He new right away he was dead.
Dr. Gordon: O....mmmm....my....god!!!!
Just then, he heard Adam yelling.
Adam: AAAAHHHH!!!! AAAAHHHH!!!! NNNNOOOO!!!! NNNNOOOO!!!! DON'T!!!! DON'T!!!! AAAAHHHH!!!!
Voice: GAME OVER!!!!
Dr. Gordon: ADAM!? ADAM!?
Dr. Gordon had then heard some1 coming. He hid in a dark shadow.
Dr. Gordon:(whispering) How.... is....Zep still....alive!?
Then the man he and Adam had been in the bathroom with had been walking past him even tho he was dead.
Dr. Gordon:(saying in his mind) JOHN!? HE'S JIGSAW!!!!
He didn't no if he should go back 4 Adam or go and try 2 get help. He went back 4 Adam.
He had opened the door and tried 2 reach the light swich.
Adam: Lawrence?
Dr. Gordon: It's.... me.
Adam: Lawrence, u have 2 go get some1. Hurry up!!!!
Dr. Gordon: Jig....saw.... is the....person.... I told u.... about.
Adam: The 1 who has 1 year 2 live?
Dr. Gordon: Yea. Wwww....where's.... Zep's gun?
Adam: Over there.
Dr. Gordon gets the gun and goes 2 the door.
Dr. Gordon:Aaaa.... Adam.... remember.... if I don't....come back....I'll bleed 2 death.
Adam:U promise, if u get help, u'll come back 4 me?
Dr. Gordon: I....wouldn't lie....2 u. I....promise.
Adam: Wait, Lawrence. Give me that hacksaw u used.
Dr. Gordon: Wwhh....why?
Adam: I'll cut my foot off.
Dr. Gordon: U....sure?
Adam: ....yea. If u die before me, I don't want u 2 be alone. So I'll die next 2 u.
Adam then starts 2 cut threw his foot. Soon, it was off.
Adam: AAAAHHHH!!!!
Dr. Gordon: Cccc....come....on....Adam.
Adam: Right be....hind u.
They then find the ladder 2 get out. Dr. Gordon then realizes that their blood will come out ov them if they stood up. They start 2 go another way and find some stairs and a door that was open above.
Adam: I'll....go 1st. Stay behind me....and I'll pull u up....as we go.
They reach the top and found what looked like a tiny library/studyroom.
Adam: Great. It's like.... I'm in....highschool again.
They look and find a big metal door thats open. They look out and saw Jigsaw looking at a set of keys trying 2 find the 1 2 the jail-like door. Dr. Gordon shoots him in the foot and Adam gets the keys.
Adam: Got....it. Llll....let's get moven.
Dr. Gordon then shoots Jigsaw in the foot again.
Dr. Gordon: Iiii.... I'll let....u....live....ur....final year....alive.
They get out ov the house. Jigsaw only saw Dr. Gordon. He didn't even no Adan got out.
Then, a car drives by and the person calls 911.
Adam: Llll....Lawrence.... we did it.
Dr. Gordon: I....don't....think....I'll....make....it. I'm....dying....right....now.
Adam: NO! WE....MADE IT....THIS FAR.... AND WE'RE GOING 2.... MAKE IT 2.... THE HOSPITAL.... AND WE'LL LIVE!!!!
Dr. Gordon starts closing his eyes slowly. Adam then starts doing it as well. An ambulance arrived.
1 MONTH LATER
Adam: Wwww....where am I? Where's Lawrence?
Nurse: Don't worry Mr. Michaelson, Dr. Gordon is allright. Speaken of which, u have visitor.
Dr. Gordon had walked in on cruches.
Dr. Gordon: Hi Adam.
Adam: Lawrence!!!! Ur allright. What about Jigsaw, is he in jail?
Dr. Gordon: I hate 2 tell u this but, the driver who saw us just checked 2 c if we were allright and called the police. We didn't say anything 2 her about Jigsaw. He escaped. No1 no's where he is. But at least we know that it's John. I woke up just hours after we got out. U slipped into a coma. U lost more blood then I did. We went back 2 the house and cing how Jigsaw didn't no u escaped, we put a fake dead body with the same cloths u were wearing where u were chained.
Adam: And Zep?
Dr. Gordon: We just left him. Unfortunetly 4 me, I cut a certain part in my foot that I couldn't get it surgecly put back on. Fortunetly 4 u, I was able 2 put ur's back on.
Adam: U put it back on?
Dr. Gordon: Yep. But 4 now, always watch ur back, Jigsaw's still out there.
Adam: But not 4 long. Soon, 4 him it will be, Game Over.
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				Furies4life
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Re: My Saw Fan Ficton
Theres a fan fic section so put it there
			
			
									
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				MiddleMan07
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Re: My Saw Fan Ficton
Its very cool, gory too! Continue  
			
			
									
									
						
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				warlord jp
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Re: My Saw Fan Ficton
Its a very good story!! I know you may have gotten confused because you are writing about a movie, thats why you put it here. But i guess it does goes in fan fiction. Please continue this great story! 
			
			
									
									
						
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Re: My Saw Fan Ficton
Guys, I hate 2 tell u this but, that's it. But if u want me 2, give me another day and I'll write another 1.
Which 1:Â Â 1.How Jigsaw got Adam(2 the bathroom)
                  or
         2.Amanda gets her victum's 2 play
1. This tells how Jigsaw got Adam in the bathroom DUH!
 DUH!
2. This takes place when Jigsaw dies and somewhat ov Saw 3 and Amanda find the finall victums Jigsaw was gonna make play his next game(1 ov which studyed Jigsaw because,Â 
  
  
  1 ov Jigsaw's past victum's was his dad).
 1 ov Jigsaw's past victum's was his dad).
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									Which 1:Â Â 1.How Jigsaw got Adam(2 the bathroom)
                  or
         2.Amanda gets her victum's 2 play
1. This tells how Jigsaw got Adam in the bathroom
 DUH!
 DUH!2. This takes place when Jigsaw dies and somewhat ov Saw 3 and Amanda find the finall victums Jigsaw was gonna make play his next game(1 ov which studyed Jigsaw because,Â
 
  
  
  1 ov Jigsaw's past victum's was his dad).
 1 ov Jigsaw's past victum's was his dad).       Â
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Re: My Saw Fan Ficton
Um....its a cool story but what does it have to do with the Warriors
			
			
									
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Re: My Saw Fan Ficton
I put it on something else(I think OFF-TOPIC) and they moved it here!!
			
			
									
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						Re: My Saw Fan Ficton
Bravo,bravo,very good story =D> =D>
			
							
			
									
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Re: My Saw Fan Ficton
Its ironic I just saw that movie for the first time last night.
			
			
									
									
						


 
  