the warriors-a love story chapter six

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the warriors-a love story chapter six

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                                        chapter six
                                        coney island

Swan and Rembrandt had been shot and everyone started rushin to them ajax ran to swan just as he fell to the ground, ajax caught hold of him and said"swan...shit swan come on wake up,someone help man". swan had blacked out but he werent dead not yet...snow ran over to rembrandt but rembrandt was in shock and was screamin"help plz help i've bin shot ahh blood..plz help snow" and snow replied"ya ok little man ya just in shock try to calm down while we take you to hospital" so swan(even though he was blacked out) and rembrandt hanged on until the ambulance came! Dianna was walkin down the street curious of the noice of sirens(she was meant to be going home to but her shoppin away but didnt)she crept round the corner to see that the ambulance near the warriors hangout...then she spotted swan on the ground gettin lifted onto the strether thing,then she ran across the path and dropped her shoppin and called out"swan no it cant be...swan wake up" she went to go in the ambulance when a furrry-chested man stood in front of her it was vermin"hey lady what do you think your doin here get away it's none of your bisness,move" she tried to explian something then ajax came over"hey lady didnt you hear what he said get out of hear swan wudnt want some stupid broad next to him pleadin for forgivness what you did was wrong,bawlin at him cos he told you why he cudnt make love to you...just who do you think you are huh". then she replied"plz can i just come with youse to the hospital plz...i will wait until he wakes up aplogise then leave just plz let me come i have rites too ya know iam in love with this guy that is lyin there nearly dieing plz just let me see he's face one more time" ajax looked at her sadly and said" but thats all im lettin you do ok"
"ok"!

So diana jumped in the back of the ambulance with ajax,vermin and snow the rest waited in the hangout,while they were in the ambulance none of them spoke a word to each other they just looked at rem and swan lyin there in the beds.diana cried the whole way to the hospital until finally they got there,the paramedics rushed out to get the two warriors out of the ambulance van and they told all the of the others to wait in the waiting room so they did! the doctor then came through to tell them some good or bad news" it seems that mr.johnson (swan) may have peirced through an important artirie that if left can kill him but we've decided to operate on him to try and stitch the artirie back together and he shud be fine if all go's well"
"what about rem-i mean the little dude"
"well mr.sanchez has been given some treatment for where he has bin shot and within 5-6 days should recover,but he is still in shock so i suggest you visit him in about 2-days and tommorow come see how mr.johnson is doin" snow nodded and said"thank's doc" the doctor smiled and went back into the surgerey room. ajax was frustrated with the whole thing he went outside for a smoke then snow and dianna talked:
"so dianna still angry at him"
"of course not..i..its just he pissed me off but i figured that if he is a lyer i shudnt be with this type of guy but for some reason a day ago i realised i really loved him and that he was the only thing that made me happy and i was going to say sorry but i thought he probally's doesnt want me which i dont blame him if he doesnt and now i want to make it up to him"
"see when he had mercy he was really happy and then when she died he suffered which you wud 8nderstand then he met you and he fell back in love and for the next couple of weeks you were the only person he talked about but at the same time he felt guilty about mercy so thats why he was confused alot and thats why he only told you at the last minute...so for doin that i think he had balls so dont waste ya time and just go for it cos he needs you"
"thanks for that and snow i will i promise"
then ajax came back in and they just sat talkin for a while and ajax forgave dianna since he found out how much she loved swan after that they fell asleep in the waiting room because they didnt feel like leavin the hospital just incase anymore news came from the doctor!!

guys that was the first part of chapter six hope you liked it...guess you've bin wating a long time to read this chapter sorry for the hold up and i will be makin secound part tomoz,and thanx for your ongoin support boppers adios untill the next time!! :D

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Well there's certainly a lot of death in this story.  Only a female writer could make going shopping a part of the story  :lol:  I like how you've brought Cropsey into the story.  Will Swan pull through? Tune in for the final part.
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Good to see this back.

Nice chapter, I thought it was pretty emotional. I like Dianna and Snow's talk and get the feeling that Swan and Rem will pull through, which makes me happy. Just make sure you give your writing a quick read-through before posting it to make sure you haven't made any silly mistakes.

Still, I'm liking this story thus far and await the next part of the chapter. Keep it up.  :D

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                                    part two of chapter six
                                    the hospital 7:00am

Dianna was the first person to wake up weridly the warriors were not lyin all over the place as you'd normally expect with any bunch of guys what were asleep all night on some hard-wooden chairs, she glanced around and found that it was quiet and that was werid for a hospital (espically a hospital in new york were there are thousands of gang members).She then decided to go look for the doctor that had told them just the other night about swan and rembrandt,she then saw him over at the reciption and went up to him and said"hey doctor is-er my boyfriend ok"
"yes he is recovering well the surgery was quite tricky but all-in-all he kept with us all the way through and shud recover in 7mounths time but he will be leaving the hospital today cos he wants to go home,but make sure he doesnt use his fists"
"how do you know about his gang-life"
"oh ive known george since he was a child really he lived in my street"
"oh ok so can i go see him"
"yeah just go up then right then left then look for the door that says 543"
"ok thanks"
and then he gave that doctor smile and waved a your-welcome-wave.

Dianna ran until she got to the door she took a deep breath and slowly pushed it open and she saw swan wide awake and gettin every checked from the nurse then she said"oh mr.johnson it seems you have a visitor i will leave you's two to talk".Swan gazed at dianna and cryed then she came over and hugged him passinately and he said"sorry i did that to you at was too soon sorry"
"no swan you dont have to say sorry its my fault ajax and snow made me understand about the mercy sitiaution so i will look after you care for you,feed you everything to make you happy and to recorver quickly", he smiled then kissed her on the cheek and said"i love you" and they spent 20minutes kissing,cuddling and pet talkin then the guys came in and hugged him after they'd just bin to see rembrandt! then swan got ready to go home and so did rem seen has he'd amzanley recovered from the shock.they all slowly walked to the subway and went home.

thats the final part of chapter six i know its a bit short but well sometimes i feel lk writing short ones and sometimes i dont but if you think about it the first part and secound part of chapter six are linked together so actaully i done a good length.yeah see what happens in chapter seven,untill next time plz comment and adios boppers!! 8) :-#

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the lady warrior wrote:                                     part two of chapter six
                                    the hospital 7:00am

Dianna was the first person to wake up weridly the warriors were not lyin all over the place as you'd normally expect with any bunch of guys what were asleep all night on some hard-wooden chairs, she glanced around and found that it was quiet and that was werid for a hospital (espically a hospital in new york were there are thousands of gang members).She then decided to go look for the doctor that had told them just the other night about swan and rembrandt,she then saw him over at the reciption and went up to him and said"hey doctor is-er my boyfriend ok"
"yes he is recovering well the surgery was quite tricky but all-in-all he kept with us all the way through and shud recover in 7mounths time but he will be leaving the hospital today cos he wants to go home,but make sure he doesnt use his fists"
"how do you know about his gang-life"
"oh ive known george since he was a child really he lived in my street"
"oh ok so can i go see him"
"yeah just go up then right then left then look for the door that says 543"
"ok thanks"
and then he gave that doctor smile and waved a your-welcome-wave.

Dianna ran until she got to the door she took a deep breath and slowly pushed it open and she saw swan wide awake and gettin every checked from the nurse then she said"oh mr.johnson it seems you have a visitor i will leave you's two to talk".Swan gazed at dianna and cryed then she came over and hugged him passinately and he said"sorry i did that to you at was too soon sorry"
"no swan you dont have to say sorry its my fault ajax and snow made me understand about the mercy sitiaution so i will look after you care for you,feed you everything to make you happy and to recorver quickly", he smiled then kissed her on the cheek and said"i love you" and they spent 20minutes kissing,cuddling and pet talkin then the guys came in and hugged him after they'd just bin to see rembrandt! then swan got ready to go home and so did rem seen has he'd amzanley recovered from the shock.they all slowly walked to the subway and went home.

thats the final part of chapter six i know its a bit short but well sometimes i feel lk writing short ones and sometimes i dont but if you think about it the first part and secound part of chapter six are linked together so actaully i done a good length.yeah see what happens in chapter seven,untill next time plz comment and adios boppers!! 8) :-#







I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT PART....lol its always swan who gets the ladies and non of the others, well its kinda easy to see that ajax dont because hes kinda abusive lol...but i love the story lady warrior your the best fan fiction writer EVER
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