all grown up- chapter two

[the lady warrior]

ok here goes:


                                          chapter two
                                          coney-island streets


Fletcher was amazed by the green du-rag's gang so much that he decided to go up to them and he said"hey erm what up im fletcher-
"fletcher white-boy where you from"
"erm a couple a block's away from here, what i came to say was i like your tag alot"
"oh do you now well i sugest you keep looking at it coz you aint touching it white-boy,". fletcher looked at them starry-eyedley and replied"i werent gonna touch anything and erm im swan the warrior leader's son", the green du-rags looked at him and confusingly asked"who now?"
"my dad he ran the streets of coney in the late 70's to late 80's he's a local celeb and soo am i...but erm could you please stop calling me white-boy"
"well we allowed to coz we are all black and you aint and plus we dont me nothin by it mann, anyway's it was good meeting ya and you got some balls kid, seeya around lil homie.. around". fletcher smiled as they took off probaly's because of the ear-blistering siren's heading there way!! fletcher strolled home and walked through the door to be met by his lil sister salena standing therewith her arms crossed clicking her heel on the floor saying"where have you been your 15minutes late"!!
"shut up mann you twerp" and he messed her lovely curly sandy hair up and walked into the kitchen and saw his dad snogging his mum, he stared in disgust and explained"guy's if you are going to do that go upstair's", his dad laughed cheerfully and said"well one day you'll get a wife no doubt and you'll be doing it just like me"
"harr-harr your the real casanova then are you?"
"ok whatever son and why were you late?"
"oh i was talking with some friends"!!, then after he went upstairs and fell asleep after doing art-homework!!

ok this is the first part of chapter two and sorry i couldnt get it all done because i have alot of thing's to do tonight and i just didnt have the time and the story will defo get more interesting in the next part, thanx for reading bopper'sxxx 8)

[wargod]

love it, cant wait to read some more

[the lady warrior]

ok guys here's part two: 8)


part two of chapter two
coney-island high school


Fletcher was sitting in his science class listening to Mr.redby droning on about eynzemes when he heard a loud, ear-aching screech. he soon realised it was the fire-alarm going off, all of the class knew what was coming(they would get dismissed from school), they all started to jump around excited like little 10 year-old again and then Mr.redby explained" class calm down.. i have an annoucment to make, just a few minutes ago a little imbasile set a fire in the princepiles office and that means that youse can all be dismissed, so without further a-do CLASSED DISMISSED". all of the class rushed out the doors happy to get away from the class-room, fletcher knew as soon as he would get home he would go looking for them green du-rags the cool coney-island gang and he couldnt wait!!

When fletcher got home he went in the living-room to see his dad reading the coney-island mail newspaper, "dad" fletcher called, swan jumped because he didnt know that his son was there and he asked" how come your outta school early today, its only l:00pm".
"some idiot set a fire in school today so we got dismissed by Mr.redby"
"oh well, go enjoy yourself with your buddy corey or something coz i know if i was your age and that happened to me i would be out like a shot". fletcher smiled and replied"ok dad oh and where's mom",
"she's out back hanging the laundry out" and with that swan got back to his newspaper and fletcher got changed into his black NY YANKEE'S sweat's and his black hoody, then he decided to go out and look for his new fascination the green du-rags. first he went to coney park but they werent there and he went round the back of twiggy the hippies shop to find they werent there and finally he gave up and sat down on one of the benches outside of twiggy's store thinking where could they be ive looked all over the normal every-day gang spots and as he was pondering he didnt notice a girl walk over to his side and sit down on the opposite side of the bench facing fletcher. fletcher stared at this girl he had never seen before and saw she had long, shiny brown hair and big brown eyes, quite small and had a flowerey top on with jeans, he noticed she was writing something in her note-book and then he looked up to find her looking at him and he politley introducd himself" hi im fletcher johnson i live a few block's away from here"
"im zoe trapinni, ive just moved here.. i live near the park", they smiled and shook hands, they talked for a while asking each other questions like:
do you have any sister's or brother's?
whats your parents called?
do you go to school?
that sorta stuff then she said"nice meeting you fletcher bye"
"bye see you in school(she was going to start school the next day)" and he waved good-bye and was mamzed at how sweet she was and interested she seemed in his conversations because most girls just stared weridley at fletcher and just knew him as that guy how go's around with the gorgeous corey harrison. he smiled thinking of her and then gazed at his watch as it read 3:00pm and he knew where he was going next!!

Fletcher took the subway to queens and after he got off walked down 5th avenue until he came to a enormous family sized house and he knocked on the door and looked through the class on the door as he saw cowboy come to the door!! cowboy had never really changed except he had short hair now styled buisness-men like and he always wore hats just not his stenson and he had a little bit of salt and pepper in his hair at the back but the rest was normal colour and he greeted fletcher with a big smile and said"hey little warrior hows thing's"
"oh fine id just thought id visit coz you are my one of my nine delegate uncles". he laughed and cuddled him then he invited him inside to sit down on his leather couch, cowboy's two little son's came in john and wayne they were twins and both looked just like thier daddy(cowboy) they were playing guns and robber's, fletcher smiled and said laughing" hey you little rascals missed me", they laughed cheekily and pretended to shoot him with thier pretendy guns he ruffled thier hair and they ran back out of the room making shooting noises on thier way!! cowboy chatted with him for an hour or so but had to go to work(he walked as a airport excutive). fletcher said farwell then got on the subway to coney and as he sat down reading his comic he noticed a scary-looking man come his way nd he sat beside him and all of a sudden the man ripped out a knife and shouted"give me your fuckin money now kid".....

what happens next, i left a cliff hanger there and i hope you enjoyed the secound part of the 2nd chapter and find out what happens in chapter 3 tommorow!! peace out bopper's 8) 8)

[Dud]

Oh boy, that's quite the cliffhanger. Lookin' forward to seeing where this goes.

Also looking forward to seeing what happens regarding Zoe and the Green Du-Rags. Seems like there's quite a few things going on in this story, and I'm interested to see what happens and if they're all linked.

Also liked the cameo by Cowboy and I think I know why his kids are called that, aha.

Good work lady warrior, keep it up! ;D