thought i'd give it a try...

dollFACE · Post by **dollFACE** » Wed Dec 07, 2005 2:07 am

awww, thanx ajax. i'm about to post the long over-due update...

dollFACE · Post by **dollFACE** » Wed Dec 07, 2005 3:15 am

track 3 - i never thought i'd be asking this
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the wind began to beat heavier when massai and all of his men had finally disappeared.

"c'mon guys..." snow spoke softly.

"yeah..." vermin added, "'cause i'm freezing my a-- off."

they crossed the park into the city streets.

"well,..." cowboy scratched the hair beneath his hat, "i guess this is it."

"until we hear from swan," snow added.

"well," rembrandt spoke, "i gotta go this way."

"it's cool little brother," vermin interrupted, "i'm headed that way anyway."

"alright guys..."

finally, they seperated.

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swan led mercy up the steps to what he knew as home.

"so this is your place?" she examined the small apartment.

"it's my sister's."

"...and you live here?"

he stared at her, "for now.... why? were you expecting some kind of palace or something?" he asked walking over to the phone.

she shrugged, pretending to play with her hair.

he watched her as a slight smile slid across his face. he punched in a few numbers and waited for a response.

finally, a familiar voice answered, "yeah..."

"...it's me."

it took a second for the man to recognize swan's voice, "oh s--t,... you made it."

"...so i guess you heard about what happened."

"of course i did. it's my job to know these things." he answered.

"look,.." swan interrupted him, "i never thought i'd be asking this... but i need your help."

to be continued...

rembrandt77 · Post by **rembrandt77** » Wed Dec 07, 2005 6:34 am

This is getting intresting. Cant wait for the next chapter, ughhh why must you make me wait

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Si-Lee-Warrior · Post by **Si-Lee-Warrior** » Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:29 pm

Brill Brill Brill Sophia, keep it coming with the good storylines, this is gettin interseting

ajaxman · Post by **ajaxman** » Fri Dec 09, 2005 7:16 pm

Doll face this is the best fan fiction I have ever read. And i have read many. You are awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter. Makes me want to write a story. You bad mama. You bad.

dollFACE · Post by **dollFACE** » Thu Dec 15, 2005 11:53 pm

ajaxman wrote: You bad mama. You bad.

thanx guys.

i appreciate the feedback and encouragement. i've been having some technical difficulties so forgive me for taking forever to post the update. well, here it goes... enjoy.

Cowboy79 · Post by **Cowboy79** » Fri Dec 16, 2005 12:28 am

You got to Update this fast as possible! This is some good Fan Fiction.

dollFACE · Post by **dollFACE** » Fri Dec 16, 2005 12:58 am

track 4-where's cleon?
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after spending less than 10 minutes on the phone, swan placed down the receiver. he glanced at mercy who was examing the photos tacked to the wall.

"this ya sister?" she asked.

"...yeah."

"...she's beautiful." and she was, with his blonde curls and unfinished smile.

there were also two infants in every picture, beautiful boys with brunette crowns instead of blonde.

"c'mon, let's go."

she frowned, "where are we goin' now?"

"just come on." he grabbed the dark sleeve of the jacket she had stolen earlier, yanking her towards him.

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"oh s--t!"

"what?!" vermin yelled as he followed rembrandt into the alley.

rembrandt peered from behind a discolored brick wall.

still confused, vermin repeated, "what is it? why are we hiding?"

rembrandt rose his right index finger over his mouth, "shhhhh..." then pointed.

vermin vaguely heard chatter coming from the direction rembrandt pointed and carefully peeked out his head. there was a police unit parked infront of rembrandt's stoop and two officers speaking to the woman standing in the doorway.

she sucked the end of the cigarette and waited before releasing the trapped smoke from her lungs, making sure to blow in the direction of the officers' faces. one of them began to cough dramatically while the other frowned, fanning away the cloud before him. she chuckled.

"ma'am... we have reason to believe your son was involved in some violent activity last night. we'd like to take him down for some questioning."

her smile faded as she took another hit from the stick between her fingers. she looked incredibly young to be his mother.

"well, i haven't seen him... you're more likely to run into him before i do." she turned and opened the door then stopped, "...and when you do, bring him home. i have some 'questioning' to do myself."

with that said, she disappeared behind a slammed door.

"if she can't control the little bastard," one officer said as they began to descend down the steps, "she should institutionalize his a--."

soon they were in the car and driving past the hidden duo.

rembrandt smacked his teeth, "i can't go home now... my mother looked pissed."

vermin was quiet.

finally he spoke... "your mom's hot."

rembrandt shook his head before punching his arm.

vermin laughed, "look, let's just go to the hang-out. maybe we'll find swan there."

"...yeah." rembrandt sighed.

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swan kept silent as mercy went on about how she wanted a piece of luther.

"we coulda took 'em without those guys showing up... hey, what do you think they did with 'em anyway?"

swan shrugged before stopping. mercy looked up at the apartment building infront of them.

"c'mon." swan led her inside and began knocking on door A102.

"where are we?" mercy whispered before asking herself why she was whispering in the first place.

suddenly the door swung open and a woman with braids stood before them. it was cleon's girlfriend.

"swan?" she looked like she was in desperate need of sleep.

he smiled sympathetically, "hey..."

mercy raised a hand, "hi."

she tried to smile then looked out into the hall as if she were expecting to see someone else, "where's cleon?"

her question pierced a nerve. he was hoping she would know... now he had his answer.

he sighed... "damn."

to be continued...

Mercy · Post by **Mercy** » Fri Dec 16, 2005 1:34 am

Ladies and gents, Warriors and suckas, I present to you the future academy award winner for best screenplay... miss Sophia "dollface" Roberts 8)

" your mom is hot "

ajaxman · Post by **ajaxman** » Fri Dec 16, 2005 2:40 am

Dollface, I am in awe. You have stayed true to the characters and every new chapter leaves me begging for more. I was going to put my own version of the day after the movie, but why bother, we have it right here. This is awesome girl. Keep em coming.

dollFACE · Post by **dollFACE** » Tue Dec 20, 2005 8:05 pm

mercy and

thanx ajax! i haven't had any time to update. i'll try to get it for you guys (and chix) a.s.a.p.

Pretty Boy · Post by **Pretty Boy** » Mon Jan 09, 2006 9:52 am

It was so good I had to read it all in one go! OMG, you're so great with words! Please, please, please write a new chapter soon! It's kinda greedy but I'm dying to know what happens next!

ZombiePunk · Post by **ZombiePunk** » Mon Jan 09, 2006 2:27 pm

this is great!
i feel bad for cleons girlfriend,

....
continue soon dollFACE!

HellsFury · Post by **HellsFury** » Wed Jan 11, 2006 6:42 am

Dollface I am very impressed with you're articulation of words. It wouldn't surpise me if you wrote and sold a succesfull novel. After reading you're story, I now have to go back and re-do my own story of the history of the Baseball Furies! Keep'em coming.

Mercy88 · Post by **Mercy88** » Sat Apr 29, 2006 3:50 pm

YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING RIGHT NOW!!!! THAT WAS THE BEST EVER!! YOU DIDNT FORGET ANY CHARACTERS!

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