Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
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Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Wow that Joey knows how to write a good story. Geat story keep it going.
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Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
JOEY SENDS:
Chapter 2 part 2:The Cars Initiation
(everyone went see Cars initiation)
Vermin-Alright Carl just take this bat and kick the living hell out of Ajax over there!
Carl-Hell yeah!
Ajax-Im waiting!
Carl-Me too!
Ajax-Aww screw it!
(Ajax charges at Car but he smashes the bat on Ajaxs head breaking it)
Cowboy-Hey man c'mon knock Ajax to the ground!
(Ajax punches Carl on the ground when he throws gravel at Ajaxs face)
Ajax-Son of a bitch!
(Carl lures Ajax into getting his hand caught in a card board wall)
Ajax-No thats not funny man!
Vermin-Nice one man!
Carl-Hell yeah Ajax come get me...Oh right you cant haha!
(Carl walks up to the place where Vermin was sitting 1 story high to give him a half five)
Vermin-Hey watch out!(pulls Carl up to avoid Ajaxs tackle)
Vermin-Ajax I said hurt the kid not kill 'im!
Carl-Its ok Vermin I could take him!
(Ajax picks up a sledge hammer and tries to trip Carl but he misses)
Carl-Whens this thing end!Huh Holy hell!(dodges Ajaxs sledge hammer)
Ajax-Faggot!Dodge this!Hahaahahah!(punches Carl in the kisser with the wooden part of the
hammer)
Carl-(wipes blood from his mouth on the ground)Dude what the! this guys an asshole!
Ajax-(picks up a cinderblock and throws it at Carl)Tss wimp!
(Carl gets up and backfilp kicks Ajax in the chin)
Swan-Hold back!(looks at Carl)Kid you got some good moves.Get him a vest.
Carl-Whoooo hoooooo!(does a backflip)
Vermin-Hey I dont remember you being that athletic in high school!Hahaha man!
Carl-Duuude!
Ajax-(raps chain around Carls neck)Congratulations!(Realeases chain)
Carl-(coughing)Holy hell hes stong!Man did you see that finishing kick?Ohh man!
Vermin-Dude who cares,your a Warrior now!Ya know Cochise died before you saw me.
Carl-Aww Cochise!Man he was a cool guy!Who jumped him?
Vemin-The Hi Hats.You know the dudes that tied my hands up?
Carl-Ohh yeah!(Puts vest on)Ohh man!It feels all good man!
Swan-Good job.You ready for the real deal young blood?
Carl-Yeah.
Swan-Good because we goin to Soho.
Carl-Yeah I know.Sorry bout Cochise.
Ajax-Hey kid you know that bat you broke on my head?Its got your name on the ducktape
I used to fix it!and you know where its going?
Carl-Up my ass turning me into a popsicle?
Ajax-Wow kid your good.Your a good brawler man maybe someday I'll teach ya and youll be
better than me!...Not Hahahaha!No but I will teach you though and I'll hit you in the nuts every
time you do something good!
Carl-Holy shit I cant wait!
Cropsey-Hey Im Cropsey the 2nd newest new blood.
Carl-(looks at Mercy)Holy hell whos she?
Vermin-Oh dont mess with her or Swan will kill ya!
Carl-Ok.
Rembrandt-Hey Swan you sure about this new blood?I mean hes cool and all but ya think
he can "brawl"?Cause he just hit Ajax a couple times ya know?
Swan-Umm yeah go get some Saracens and ask em to fool around with him.
Rembrandt-Ok warchief.
(Rembrandt and Vermin take Carl to Benonhurst to train)
Saracens leader-Hey Vermin,Rembrandt,hey whos this guy?
Vermin-Hey this is a new blood,Carl,we came here to teach him how to brawl!
Saracen lt.-Yeeaah we'll brawl!(evil smile)
Carl-Oh shit.
(so they go and take Carl to brawl...back to the hangout)
Cropsey-Think that kids gonna be alright?
Cowboy-Yeah man he could do it!
Ajax-Dude my freakin chin hurts!Faggot!
Cropsey-Hey Ajax join me for a beer outside.
Ajax-Ok.
(when they go outside while sippin his booz an arrow goes through Cropseys beer)
Cropsey-Holy shit!Hey theres a letter!(picks up note)Reads:Beware and Prepare.
Ajax-Hey look up there,its the Faggot hats.
(they run inside)
Cropsey-Dude dude dude!Th-th-the Hi-Hats are coming!look at this note!
Swan-Settle down,we'll get em later.
Till next one!
Chapter 2 part 2:The Cars Initiation
(everyone went see Cars initiation)
Vermin-Alright Carl just take this bat and kick the living hell out of Ajax over there!
Carl-Hell yeah!
Ajax-Im waiting!
Carl-Me too!
Ajax-Aww screw it!
(Ajax charges at Car but he smashes the bat on Ajaxs head breaking it)
Cowboy-Hey man c'mon knock Ajax to the ground!
(Ajax punches Carl on the ground when he throws gravel at Ajaxs face)
Ajax-Son of a bitch!
(Carl lures Ajax into getting his hand caught in a card board wall)
Ajax-No thats not funny man!
Vermin-Nice one man!
Carl-Hell yeah Ajax come get me...Oh right you cant haha!
(Carl walks up to the place where Vermin was sitting 1 story high to give him a half five)
Vermin-Hey watch out!(pulls Carl up to avoid Ajaxs tackle)
Vermin-Ajax I said hurt the kid not kill 'im!
Carl-Its ok Vermin I could take him!
(Ajax picks up a sledge hammer and tries to trip Carl but he misses)
Carl-Whens this thing end!Huh Holy hell!(dodges Ajaxs sledge hammer)
Ajax-Faggot!Dodge this!Hahaahahah!(punches Carl in the kisser with the wooden part of the
hammer)
Carl-(wipes blood from his mouth on the ground)Dude what the! this guys an asshole!
Ajax-(picks up a cinderblock and throws it at Carl)Tss wimp!
(Carl gets up and backfilp kicks Ajax in the chin)
Swan-Hold back!(looks at Carl)Kid you got some good moves.Get him a vest.
Carl-Whoooo hoooooo!(does a backflip)
Vermin-Hey I dont remember you being that athletic in high school!Hahaha man!
Carl-Duuude!
Ajax-(raps chain around Carls neck)Congratulations!(Realeases chain)
Carl-(coughing)Holy hell hes stong!Man did you see that finishing kick?Ohh man!
Vermin-Dude who cares,your a Warrior now!Ya know Cochise died before you saw me.
Carl-Aww Cochise!Man he was a cool guy!Who jumped him?
Vemin-The Hi Hats.You know the dudes that tied my hands up?
Carl-Ohh yeah!(Puts vest on)Ohh man!It feels all good man!
Swan-Good job.You ready for the real deal young blood?
Carl-Yeah.
Swan-Good because we goin to Soho.
Carl-Yeah I know.Sorry bout Cochise.
Ajax-Hey kid you know that bat you broke on my head?Its got your name on the ducktape
I used to fix it!and you know where its going?
Carl-Up my ass turning me into a popsicle?
Ajax-Wow kid your good.Your a good brawler man maybe someday I'll teach ya and youll be
better than me!...Not Hahahaha!No but I will teach you though and I'll hit you in the nuts every
time you do something good!
Carl-Holy shit I cant wait!
Cropsey-Hey Im Cropsey the 2nd newest new blood.
Carl-(looks at Mercy)Holy hell whos she?
Vermin-Oh dont mess with her or Swan will kill ya!
Carl-Ok.
Rembrandt-Hey Swan you sure about this new blood?I mean hes cool and all but ya think
he can "brawl"?Cause he just hit Ajax a couple times ya know?
Swan-Umm yeah go get some Saracens and ask em to fool around with him.
Rembrandt-Ok warchief.
(Rembrandt and Vermin take Carl to Benonhurst to train)
Saracens leader-Hey Vermin,Rembrandt,hey whos this guy?
Vermin-Hey this is a new blood,Carl,we came here to teach him how to brawl!
Saracen lt.-Yeeaah we'll brawl!(evil smile)
Carl-Oh shit.
(so they go and take Carl to brawl...back to the hangout)
Cropsey-Think that kids gonna be alright?
Cowboy-Yeah man he could do it!
Ajax-Dude my freakin chin hurts!Faggot!
Cropsey-Hey Ajax join me for a beer outside.
Ajax-Ok.
(when they go outside while sippin his booz an arrow goes through Cropseys beer)
Cropsey-Holy shit!Hey theres a letter!(picks up note)Reads:Beware and Prepare.
Ajax-Hey look up there,its the Faggot hats.
(they run inside)
Cropsey-Dude dude dude!Th-th-the Hi-Hats are coming!look at this note!
Swan-Settle down,we'll get em later.
Till next one!
The one and only!
Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
This is soo freakin awesome you should make a book, that would be even more awesome
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man this is the only fan fic I keep up on I love it
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Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
This is coming out wicked awesome dude!! 

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Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Joey's next installment:
Part 3:Brothers Fallen
(the 3 Warriors came back from Benonhurst)
Vermin-Hey people!
Rembrandt-Heys guys!
Carl-(beaten up and drowsy voice)Hey you guys uhhhh...(falls flat on his face)
Vermin-Yeah they kicked his ass but he succeeded.
Ajax-Holy craphole!
Vermin-Yeah I know hes really bad!
Ajax-No not that you faggot!Look out there!(points outside)
Cowboy-Oh great the Circus is in town.
Hi-Hats lt.-(another 1 with a sqeaky voice)Hahahaha!Warriors you wimps!
Ajax-Yeah you faggots lets settle this right here...c'mon.Ttt aww you faggots!
(Vermin picks up his nail gun)
Vermin-Take this.
(He shoots at a cars gasoline tank behind the Hi-Hats)
Hi-Hat-Haha ya missed!
Vermin-I wasnt tryin to hit ya!Idoits!
(Kaboom)
Hi-Hat-Aww man that gonna leave a mark!
Lt.-Oh shit this burns!
Mercy-Nice aim.
Swan-Ok lets just get the kid back together.
Carl-(mumbling)Ohh ohh no more cupcakes no more churros!
Cropsey-(pops his bubble gum)Tsss new bloods!
Rembrandt-Aww shut up Cropsey you're a new blood!
Cowboy-(pours beer in Carls mouth)C'mon man wake up with the cupcakes and all!
Carl-Huh?What happened?
Vermin-Ya fell asleep man wake up!
Carl-Yeah Im fine Im good.
Swan-We gonna prepare.
Ajax-What,now Im mean like-
Vermin-Big boy shut up we going to prepare.
Ajax-You going faggot on me Vermin?
Vermin-You lookin for a fight!Cause Im lookin for one I mean lets go!
(they 2 start talking smack to each other and start to fight on the ground)
Rembrandt-Guys stop!C'mon!
(Rembrandt grabs his knife and throws it on the ground to try and stop the fight but it
fails)
Cropsey-Kowabunnga!!(jumps in the floor fight)
Cowboy-Yeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaawwwww!!(also jumps in the fight)
Mercy-I know how to stop it!
(She pops out firecrackers and throws them at the fighting Warriors stopping the fight)
Cowboy-Oww fuck that stings!
Swan-Nice one.
Mercy-Is this a nice one?(kisses Swan)
Vermin-So you 2 made up now huh?
Mercy-I guess yeah.We're ok now.
Swan-Lets go.
(So they head off to Soho carrying gear and left over hammers from the Moonrunner fight)
Vermin-Any one got a set of nails?Cause my guns running out.
Rembrandt-Yeah here ya go.
Vermin-Hey kid why do you even carry nails around?
Rembrandt-Just in case I need to nail something in or for a nail gun!
Vermin-Ok.
Swan-We're almost there.Cowboy you take Ajax and Carl and go round back.
(they depart and meet up outside the Hi-Hats hangout)
Cropsey-(pops his bubble gum 5 times slowly)
Ajax-(whispering)What the hell are you doing man?
Cropsey-(whispering)Watch.Three,two,one.
(Some Hi-Hats and the leader come walking outside)
Cropsey-(still whispering)Alright lets walk in side and hide behind the entrance.
Vermin-Awsome.
(they do that)
Carl-Everybody ssshhhh!
(when the leader walks in Vermin tries shooting him in the head but his hood is covering a
metal helmet the leaders wearing)
Vermin-(in his mind)Oh Fuck me fuck me I screwed up!
Hi-Hats leader-Alrighty!Who are the punks that blew up some Hats?
Cowboy-Shit you guys took out Cochise!We just wanna settle the score.
(Cowboy walks toward the leader,Ajax and vermin try holding him back but he pushes them
away)
Hi-Hats leader-C'mon...Take a swing at me!Hahahahaha!
Cowboy-If you say so.
(Cowboy tries hitting him but he gets knocked down)
Ajax-You hurt one Warrior too many.Now your gonna pay!Faggot!
(Ajax pops out a knife and stabs the leader in the head)
Cropsey-Vermin.
(Vermin shoots like crazy like Scarface but still manages to kill a few people)
Carl-You Shits!!!!
(Someone from above jumps down to stab Vermin)
Rembrandt-Vermin watch out!!!!
Vermin-Ahhhh!
(that Hi-Hat cut Vermin on the back but Vermin shot the other dude)
Vermin-Uhhnnnn....(falls to the ground)
Ajax-Kid!(runs over to Vermin)
Ajax-Vermin you ok man...AHHHHHHHH!!
(Ajax was going AHHHHHH! because he was shot with another needle gun)
Ajax-Huh kid uhhnn,you uhnn ok?
Vermin-Yeah unhnnn.
(the 2 crawl toward each other and grab each other)
Cowboy-Umm you guys ok?
Vermin-Guys go.Go home to Coney.We'll uhnn just go.
Cropsey-But
Vermin-GO!!
Carl-No.Im not going.Im staying right here.
Swan-C'mon lets pick em up.Cropsey,Cowboy you pick up Vermin,Carl,Rembrandt,you get
Ajax.Lets go.
Till part 3 mcdudes and dudets!
Part 3:Brothers Fallen
(the 3 Warriors came back from Benonhurst)
Vermin-Hey people!
Rembrandt-Heys guys!
Carl-(beaten up and drowsy voice)Hey you guys uhhhh...(falls flat on his face)
Vermin-Yeah they kicked his ass but he succeeded.
Ajax-Holy craphole!
Vermin-Yeah I know hes really bad!
Ajax-No not that you faggot!Look out there!(points outside)
Cowboy-Oh great the Circus is in town.
Hi-Hats lt.-(another 1 with a sqeaky voice)Hahahaha!Warriors you wimps!
Ajax-Yeah you faggots lets settle this right here...c'mon.Ttt aww you faggots!
(Vermin picks up his nail gun)
Vermin-Take this.
(He shoots at a cars gasoline tank behind the Hi-Hats)
Hi-Hat-Haha ya missed!
Vermin-I wasnt tryin to hit ya!Idoits!
(Kaboom)
Hi-Hat-Aww man that gonna leave a mark!
Lt.-Oh shit this burns!
Mercy-Nice aim.
Swan-Ok lets just get the kid back together.
Carl-(mumbling)Ohh ohh no more cupcakes no more churros!
Cropsey-(pops his bubble gum)Tsss new bloods!
Rembrandt-Aww shut up Cropsey you're a new blood!
Cowboy-(pours beer in Carls mouth)C'mon man wake up with the cupcakes and all!
Carl-Huh?What happened?
Vermin-Ya fell asleep man wake up!
Carl-Yeah Im fine Im good.
Swan-We gonna prepare.
Ajax-What,now Im mean like-
Vermin-Big boy shut up we going to prepare.
Ajax-You going faggot on me Vermin?
Vermin-You lookin for a fight!Cause Im lookin for one I mean lets go!
(they 2 start talking smack to each other and start to fight on the ground)
Rembrandt-Guys stop!C'mon!
(Rembrandt grabs his knife and throws it on the ground to try and stop the fight but it
fails)
Cropsey-Kowabunnga!!(jumps in the floor fight)
Cowboy-Yeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaawwwww!!(also jumps in the fight)
Mercy-I know how to stop it!
(She pops out firecrackers and throws them at the fighting Warriors stopping the fight)
Cowboy-Oww fuck that stings!
Swan-Nice one.
Mercy-Is this a nice one?(kisses Swan)
Vermin-So you 2 made up now huh?
Mercy-I guess yeah.We're ok now.
Swan-Lets go.
(So they head off to Soho carrying gear and left over hammers from the Moonrunner fight)
Vermin-Any one got a set of nails?Cause my guns running out.
Rembrandt-Yeah here ya go.
Vermin-Hey kid why do you even carry nails around?
Rembrandt-Just in case I need to nail something in or for a nail gun!
Vermin-Ok.
Swan-We're almost there.Cowboy you take Ajax and Carl and go round back.
(they depart and meet up outside the Hi-Hats hangout)
Cropsey-(pops his bubble gum 5 times slowly)
Ajax-(whispering)What the hell are you doing man?
Cropsey-(whispering)Watch.Three,two,one.
(Some Hi-Hats and the leader come walking outside)
Cropsey-(still whispering)Alright lets walk in side and hide behind the entrance.
Vermin-Awsome.
(they do that)
Carl-Everybody ssshhhh!
(when the leader walks in Vermin tries shooting him in the head but his hood is covering a
metal helmet the leaders wearing)
Vermin-(in his mind)Oh Fuck me fuck me I screwed up!
Hi-Hats leader-Alrighty!Who are the punks that blew up some Hats?
Cowboy-Shit you guys took out Cochise!We just wanna settle the score.
(Cowboy walks toward the leader,Ajax and vermin try holding him back but he pushes them
away)
Hi-Hats leader-C'mon...Take a swing at me!Hahahahaha!
Cowboy-If you say so.
(Cowboy tries hitting him but he gets knocked down)
Ajax-You hurt one Warrior too many.Now your gonna pay!Faggot!
(Ajax pops out a knife and stabs the leader in the head)
Cropsey-Vermin.
(Vermin shoots like crazy like Scarface but still manages to kill a few people)
Carl-You Shits!!!!
(Someone from above jumps down to stab Vermin)
Rembrandt-Vermin watch out!!!!
Vermin-Ahhhh!
(that Hi-Hat cut Vermin on the back but Vermin shot the other dude)
Vermin-Uhhnnnn....(falls to the ground)
Ajax-Kid!(runs over to Vermin)
Ajax-Vermin you ok man...AHHHHHHHH!!
(Ajax was going AHHHHHH! because he was shot with another needle gun)
Ajax-Huh kid uhhnn,you uhnn ok?
Vermin-Yeah unhnnn.
(the 2 crawl toward each other and grab each other)
Cowboy-Umm you guys ok?
Vermin-Guys go.Go home to Coney.We'll uhnn just go.
Cropsey-But
Vermin-GO!!
Carl-No.Im not going.Im staying right here.
Swan-C'mon lets pick em up.Cropsey,Cowboy you pick up Vermin,Carl,Rembrandt,you get
Ajax.Lets go.
Till part 3 mcdudes and dudets!
The one and only!
Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
This just keeps getting better and better
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Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Man you should copy all this, paste it in microsoft word, print it, and send the thing to a publisher!!
Great Job!!

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Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
I hope Vermin and Ajax make it back home. Wonder what happens next.
Vermin2_2 so true. Make this a book!
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Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Chapter 2 Part 4:The Circus Has Left Coney
(still on the the way back to Coney)
Cowboy-Man Ajax is getting heavy can we stop warchief?
Swan-No.
Carl-Mmmm...
Ajax-(mumbling)Guys uhnn we there yet?
Rembrandt-Nope,we gotta long way to go Ajax.A long way...
Vermin-Guys,what happened?
Carl-Feel a liquid on your back man?
Vermin-Yeah.What about that?Aint that sweat?
Carl-Nope.Thats blood baby!
Vermin-Ahhhh!Man.What caused THAT!
Cropsey-Settle down man!...Dammit!
Ajax-Hey Vermin,if you think blood down your back is bad,look at my side!
Vermin-Holy hell is that a...
Ajax-Yeah a nail,dont you remember?
Rembrandt-He shouldnt.If you get sliced in the back,it blacks you out.
Ajax-Where'd the hell did you hear that?
Rembrandt-My ma was a nurse.
Swan-Lets hit the subway.
(they get on the subway and lay Ajax and Vermin on the seats)
Cowboy-Goddamn my arms hurt!Im gonna hit the hay and call it a day.(falls asleep)
Carl-(yawning and talking)Aww man me too.(falls asleep)
Cropsey-Me three.(also falls asleep)
Mercy-You gonna fall asleep too?
Rembrandt-Naaa Im good,and I had coffee earlier.
(Hours go by and eventually Rembrandt fell asleep)
Mercy-So just you and me.
Swan-Yep.
Mercy-What you wanna do?
Swan-I dont know.
Mercy-(grabs on to Swan)You like me huh!
Swan-A little yeah.
(Both of them move closer and end up basicly the whole time kissing)
Vermin-(mumbling)Oh screw off you darn clowns!Laugh your way to...
(everyone continues doing what they're doing until the door opens on the subway)
Mercy-Thats a cop,then another and a...
Swan-Guys wake up!
Cropsey-Huh whats up?
Swan-The cops.
Ajax-Oh shit.
Police officer-Hey Paul lets get this train.
Vermin-Hey guys.Oh shit the cops!
Cropsey-What do we do!?
Rembrandt-Hold up,I'll try and destract them.Guys go out the other end of the subway and
I'll meet up with ya.
Cowboy-Be careful man.
(they leave as Rembrandt sneaks out of the train)
Rembrandt-Hey you pigs!Catch this!
(He throws a molotov in the air as a cop shoots it which was the distaction)
Rembrandt-Guys lets go!C'mon!
Vermin-Uhnn,guys uhhnn,I cant make it go without me!
Carl-Nooooo!Ajax quick help me pick him up!
Ajax-Fine.
Carl-Guys lets split up.Me and Ajax will go from Saracens turf,to home bye!
Cowboy-See ya!
(they run off)
(at the Saracens place)
Carl-Guys!Dudes get out here Vermins down!C'mon!
Saracen-Dude what you doing here its 3 in the morning!
Carl-Guys we need ya to help Vermin.Hes pretty bad.So just give us a call in the morn
or bring him to us.
Saracen-Ok sure.See yalls later!
Ajax-Kid its the cops.
Carl-What do we do?
Ajax-Run!Lets split up!If anything happens to ya,just scream like a little bitch and I'll know
its you!So go!
(They depart and after an hour they both get to the base safely)
Carl-Hey Ajax!
Ajax-Lose 'em?
Carl-Heck yeah!
Swan-Hey wheres Vermin?
Carl-Ohh we dropped him off at the Saracens place.
Swan-Ok.
(Everyone does what they usually do)
Till part 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(still on the the way back to Coney)
Cowboy-Man Ajax is getting heavy can we stop warchief?
Swan-No.
Carl-Mmmm...
Ajax-(mumbling)Guys uhnn we there yet?
Rembrandt-Nope,we gotta long way to go Ajax.A long way...
Vermin-Guys,what happened?
Carl-Feel a liquid on your back man?
Vermin-Yeah.What about that?Aint that sweat?
Carl-Nope.Thats blood baby!
Vermin-Ahhhh!Man.What caused THAT!
Cropsey-Settle down man!...Dammit!
Ajax-Hey Vermin,if you think blood down your back is bad,look at my side!
Vermin-Holy hell is that a...
Ajax-Yeah a nail,dont you remember?
Rembrandt-He shouldnt.If you get sliced in the back,it blacks you out.
Ajax-Where'd the hell did you hear that?
Rembrandt-My ma was a nurse.
Swan-Lets hit the subway.
(they get on the subway and lay Ajax and Vermin on the seats)
Cowboy-Goddamn my arms hurt!Im gonna hit the hay and call it a day.(falls asleep)
Carl-(yawning and talking)Aww man me too.(falls asleep)
Cropsey-Me three.(also falls asleep)
Mercy-You gonna fall asleep too?
Rembrandt-Naaa Im good,and I had coffee earlier.
(Hours go by and eventually Rembrandt fell asleep)
Mercy-So just you and me.
Swan-Yep.
Mercy-What you wanna do?
Swan-I dont know.
Mercy-(grabs on to Swan)You like me huh!
Swan-A little yeah.
(Both of them move closer and end up basicly the whole time kissing)
Vermin-(mumbling)Oh screw off you darn clowns!Laugh your way to...
(everyone continues doing what they're doing until the door opens on the subway)
Mercy-Thats a cop,then another and a...
Swan-Guys wake up!
Cropsey-Huh whats up?
Swan-The cops.
Ajax-Oh shit.
Police officer-Hey Paul lets get this train.
Vermin-Hey guys.Oh shit the cops!
Cropsey-What do we do!?
Rembrandt-Hold up,I'll try and destract them.Guys go out the other end of the subway and
I'll meet up with ya.
Cowboy-Be careful man.
(they leave as Rembrandt sneaks out of the train)
Rembrandt-Hey you pigs!Catch this!
(He throws a molotov in the air as a cop shoots it which was the distaction)
Rembrandt-Guys lets go!C'mon!
Vermin-Uhnn,guys uhhnn,I cant make it go without me!
Carl-Nooooo!Ajax quick help me pick him up!
Ajax-Fine.
Carl-Guys lets split up.Me and Ajax will go from Saracens turf,to home bye!
Cowboy-See ya!
(they run off)
(at the Saracens place)
Carl-Guys!Dudes get out here Vermins down!C'mon!
Saracen-Dude what you doing here its 3 in the morning!
Carl-Guys we need ya to help Vermin.Hes pretty bad.So just give us a call in the morn
or bring him to us.
Saracen-Ok sure.See yalls later!
Ajax-Kid its the cops.
Carl-What do we do?
Ajax-Run!Lets split up!If anything happens to ya,just scream like a little bitch and I'll know
its you!So go!
(They depart and after an hour they both get to the base safely)
Carl-Hey Ajax!
Ajax-Lose 'em?
Carl-Heck yeah!
Swan-Hey wheres Vermin?
Carl-Ohh we dropped him off at the Saracens place.
Swan-Ok.
(Everyone does what they usually do)
Till part 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Damn this Joey makes every chapter sound intresting. Captures the feeling.
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Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Joey has sent me the awaited Part 5:Hell Breaks Loose
(that morning two Saracens came to the hangout to drop off Vermin)
Saracen-Here you go guys.Vermins all good.
Carl-Thanks man.
(the 2 Saracens leave the base)
Vermin-Ohhhhh shoot man.I feel wierd.
Ajax-Hey should I pull this needle out or what?
Rembrandt-Put alchohol on it and then pull it out.
(Ajax walks in the bathroom and then seconds later screams like Tarzan and a little
girl together)
Ajax-REMBRANDT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rembrandt-Hey man I didnt say it wouldnt burn!
Ajax-Im gonna mangle you and strangle you!
(Ajax chases Rembrandt all around the hangout)
Rembrandt-Guys help meeeeeee!
(they continue running until something makes a noise)
Cowboy-What the hell was that?
Someone-Warriors!C'mon!Get out here!
Swan-Guys go out the back on to the roof.
Cropsey-But-
Swan-Go.
(they go up to the roof)
Vermin-Ohh shit.Its the Satans Mothers.What do we do?
Swan-Cinderblocks and bricks.
Ajax-Huh?
Swan-Cropsey load up the bricks in the cart,Rembrandt,help him.
(they load the stuff and then dump it off the roof on to the Mothers)
Satans Mother-Man thats gonna be sore.
Vermin-Hahahahahaha!!!!Suckers!
Satans Mothers leader-C'mon Mothers get up!(looks up at Warriors)You guys
shot Cyrus!You A-holes!
Cropsey-No we did not!
Mother-Did to!
Cropsey-Did not!
Mother-Did to times a googol!
Cropsey-Damn he got me there.
Vermin-You dipshit Cropsey!
Mother-Just let us kill you and be off!
(A mother throws a molotov at them but Rembrandt catches it but falls off the roof)
Rembrandt-Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Swan-Rembrandt!(jumps off the roof)
(they both land in front of the Mothers)
Swan-You unhh ok?
Rembrandt-Uhnnnnnn no.I think im gonna uhnnnn...(passes out on the ground)
Swan-Leave Coney.
Mother-Nowhere to run...Warrior.
Vermin-Cropsey light it.
Cropsey-Yeeehooo!
(Vermin throws a molotov at the Mothers)
Vermin-What the hell?Its like they're...
Cowboy-Wearing leather.We gotta hit em where it hurts.
Ajax-Wheres that?
Cowboy-Carl,go call the Riffs,now.
Carl-Yesss sir!
(Carl runs to the phone in the hangout)
Carl-Hello?Let me talk to Masai quick...Hello?Hey whats up.Bring your best soldiers to Coney...
Please as fast as you can...ok bye!
(He runs back up to roof)
Cowboy-Call em?
Carl-Yeah...we just gotta hold back until they get here.
Mercy-But Swans down there.
Cowboy-Swan gonna be fine.
Until part 2 to this one!!!!!!!!!
(that morning two Saracens came to the hangout to drop off Vermin)
Saracen-Here you go guys.Vermins all good.
Carl-Thanks man.
(the 2 Saracens leave the base)
Vermin-Ohhhhh shoot man.I feel wierd.
Ajax-Hey should I pull this needle out or what?
Rembrandt-Put alchohol on it and then pull it out.
(Ajax walks in the bathroom and then seconds later screams like Tarzan and a little
girl together)
Ajax-REMBRANDT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rembrandt-Hey man I didnt say it wouldnt burn!
Ajax-Im gonna mangle you and strangle you!
(Ajax chases Rembrandt all around the hangout)
Rembrandt-Guys help meeeeeee!
(they continue running until something makes a noise)
Cowboy-What the hell was that?
Someone-Warriors!C'mon!Get out here!
Swan-Guys go out the back on to the roof.
Cropsey-But-
Swan-Go.
(they go up to the roof)
Vermin-Ohh shit.Its the Satans Mothers.What do we do?
Swan-Cinderblocks and bricks.
Ajax-Huh?
Swan-Cropsey load up the bricks in the cart,Rembrandt,help him.
(they load the stuff and then dump it off the roof on to the Mothers)
Satans Mother-Man thats gonna be sore.
Vermin-Hahahahahaha!!!!Suckers!
Satans Mothers leader-C'mon Mothers get up!(looks up at Warriors)You guys
shot Cyrus!You A-holes!
Cropsey-No we did not!
Mother-Did to!
Cropsey-Did not!
Mother-Did to times a googol!
Cropsey-Damn he got me there.
Vermin-You dipshit Cropsey!
Mother-Just let us kill you and be off!
(A mother throws a molotov at them but Rembrandt catches it but falls off the roof)
Rembrandt-Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Swan-Rembrandt!(jumps off the roof)
(they both land in front of the Mothers)
Swan-You unhh ok?
Rembrandt-Uhnnnnnn no.I think im gonna uhnnnn...(passes out on the ground)
Swan-Leave Coney.
Mother-Nowhere to run...Warrior.
Vermin-Cropsey light it.
Cropsey-Yeeehooo!
(Vermin throws a molotov at the Mothers)
Vermin-What the hell?Its like they're...
Cowboy-Wearing leather.We gotta hit em where it hurts.
Ajax-Wheres that?
Cowboy-Carl,go call the Riffs,now.
Carl-Yesss sir!
(Carl runs to the phone in the hangout)
Carl-Hello?Let me talk to Masai quick...Hello?Hey whats up.Bring your best soldiers to Coney...
Please as fast as you can...ok bye!
(He runs back up to roof)
Cowboy-Call em?
Carl-Yeah...we just gotta hold back until they get here.
Mercy-But Swans down there.
Cowboy-Swan gonna be fine.
Until part 2 to this one!!!!!!!!!
The one and only!
Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Part 2 to part 5:All Hell Breaks Loose
(half hour later the Riffs show up on the Warriors roof)
Masia-What do you need Warriors?
Vermin-Look.The Satans Mothers got Swan trapped down there and they wanna kill us!
Riff-Oh these wimps!Lets go!
Masai-Hold up.
(Ajax runs up to Masai to punch him)
Ajax-You fucks!You killed Cleon!(keeps yelling shit at Masai while Cropsey and Vermin hold
him back)
Vermin-Calm down stretch!
Masai-Warriors,follow us and cut back around so we're behind them.We gonna ambush
the Mothers.
(they walk around the block and end up behind the Satans Mothers)
Mothers leader-Well well well Warriors I thinks yalls gonna die!
Swan-Screw you.
(the other Warriors and the Riffs attack the Mothers)
It was cool.Masai did a flip kick on a guy and then dip a nice roundhouse kick.Vermin made
mans head meet crowbar.A mother got hit so many times,that he squealed like a girl and
ran home.Mercy took Rembrandt in the hangout to help him.Cropsey got whipped with
whips and belts.A Riff elbowed a dude in the head giving Swan an advantage to hit him.
Cowboy kicked some butt,he hit some Mothers so hard,you could hear their teeth break.
Thats pretty hard!Ajax kept punching people in the head with brass knuckles,OUCH!Some
Mothers got knifes to the head.Rembrandt stepped out side into the fight.He sprayed a W
on a Mothers face just like the Punks fight.Vermin dunked a Mothers head in gasoline,and
threw his lighter at him,BBQ on the Satans Mother!Swan kicked major behind.He broke
a dudes neck just by tripping him.Masia killed a mother by a squeeze in the neck.Carl just
kept tripping everybody and hitting them when they were down.Cropsey got his ass kicked
but managed to hit a few dudes.Rembrandt kicked some butt,he sprayed another dude,hit
him down,and then hit his head with a sledge hammer thrice.A Mother got choked with a
pair of crowbars.Yet again,your Warriors won the fight.
Swan-Thanks.
Masia-No problem.
Cowboy-Yeeeeeeeeeehooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mothers leader-(gets up)Die Warriorrrrrrrrrrrsssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!(runs to stab Swan)
(Swan flips him over and then the Riffs do the same thing they did to Cleon)
Masia-Anything else?
Vermin-Naaaaaaaaaa...
(the Riffs leave)
Rembrandt-What I miss?
Cropsey-Owww owww!(pours beer on cuts)OWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!
Ajax-Wimp!!!
Vermin-Well that showed them.
Ajax-I still wanna be Warlord.
Swan-C'mon then.
Cowboy-Cleons choice,Swans warchief.
Ajax-Well ya know Cleons probally got a knife sticked half way up his ass!
Rembrandt-Dont you remember last month?(what he really means is remember back to
the first story first chapter)
Swan-Lets go inside.
(they go inside and do whatever)
till part 6!!!!!!!
(half hour later the Riffs show up on the Warriors roof)
Masia-What do you need Warriors?
Vermin-Look.The Satans Mothers got Swan trapped down there and they wanna kill us!
Riff-Oh these wimps!Lets go!
Masai-Hold up.
(Ajax runs up to Masai to punch him)
Ajax-You fucks!You killed Cleon!(keeps yelling shit at Masai while Cropsey and Vermin hold
him back)
Vermin-Calm down stretch!
Masai-Warriors,follow us and cut back around so we're behind them.We gonna ambush
the Mothers.
(they walk around the block and end up behind the Satans Mothers)
Mothers leader-Well well well Warriors I thinks yalls gonna die!
Swan-Screw you.
(the other Warriors and the Riffs attack the Mothers)
It was cool.Masai did a flip kick on a guy and then dip a nice roundhouse kick.Vermin made
mans head meet crowbar.A mother got hit so many times,that he squealed like a girl and
ran home.Mercy took Rembrandt in the hangout to help him.Cropsey got whipped with
whips and belts.A Riff elbowed a dude in the head giving Swan an advantage to hit him.
Cowboy kicked some butt,he hit some Mothers so hard,you could hear their teeth break.
Thats pretty hard!Ajax kept punching people in the head with brass knuckles,OUCH!Some
Mothers got knifes to the head.Rembrandt stepped out side into the fight.He sprayed a W
on a Mothers face just like the Punks fight.Vermin dunked a Mothers head in gasoline,and
threw his lighter at him,BBQ on the Satans Mother!Swan kicked major behind.He broke
a dudes neck just by tripping him.Masia killed a mother by a squeeze in the neck.Carl just
kept tripping everybody and hitting them when they were down.Cropsey got his ass kicked
but managed to hit a few dudes.Rembrandt kicked some butt,he sprayed another dude,hit
him down,and then hit his head with a sledge hammer thrice.A Mother got choked with a
pair of crowbars.Yet again,your Warriors won the fight.
Swan-Thanks.
Masia-No problem.
Cowboy-Yeeeeeeeeeehooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mothers leader-(gets up)Die Warriorrrrrrrrrrrsssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!(runs to stab Swan)
(Swan flips him over and then the Riffs do the same thing they did to Cleon)
Masia-Anything else?
Vermin-Naaaaaaaaaa...
(the Riffs leave)
Rembrandt-What I miss?
Cropsey-Owww owww!(pours beer on cuts)OWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!
Ajax-Wimp!!!
Vermin-Well that showed them.
Ajax-I still wanna be Warlord.
Swan-C'mon then.
Cowboy-Cleons choice,Swans warchief.
Ajax-Well ya know Cleons probally got a knife sticked half way up his ass!
Rembrandt-Dont you remember last month?(what he really means is remember back to
the first story first chapter)
Swan-Lets go inside.
(they go inside and do whatever)
till part 6!!!!!!!
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Ummmmmm wanttttttt moreeeeeeeeeee LOL. War Cheif why dosent joey become a member he could get lots of Karma from me.LOL Awsome storyyy.
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Joey's supplied the next part!!
Part 6:Electrify It
(the next day)
Cowboy-Hey toss me a beer!
Vermin-Right on it.
(Vermin tosses a beer at Cowboy)
Cropsey-(still trying to fix wip cuts)Owww,oww,oww.Someone toss me a cotton ball
and alchohol,NOW!!!!
Rembrandt-There ya go Crop.
Cropsey-(screams like a little bitch)
Ajax-Tsssss...Wimp!
Carl-Hey Im gonna go outside,anyone wanna join me ?
Ajax-I'll join.(walks toward the roof with Carl)
(the 2 walk toward the hotdog stand to buy hotdogs and lemonade)
Ajax-Mmmm.I havent had a hotdog in days!
(After they finish lunch they see some yellow suits running towards them in the fog)
Ajax-Ohhh shit just run!
(the two start to run)
Carl-Lets split up!
Ajax-Suit yourself!Meet back at the hangout!See ya!
(the two just run like hell back to the hangout through allyways)
Ajax-(crashes through the door of the hangout)Huhh...Yellow jackets huh...Running huh.
Vermin-Wheres Carl?
(just as he says that Carl crashes through the window)
Carl-Ohh shit!
Swan-What happened?
Mercy-Yeah what happened?
Vermin-Oh I think this is gonna help.(picks up a knife with a letter tied to it)
(just then the Electric Eliminators walk in the hangout)
Eliminator leader-You guys shot Cyrus.Now ya gonna burn in hell!
Vermin-No we didnt.
(just then Vermin shoots the leader in the arm)
Cowboy-Kill 'em all!!
The fight started.Carl picked up a broken piece of glass and puts it in a Eliminators
head.Ajax kicked some ass,he hit some dude to the ground breaking their legs.Swan
elbowed the leader in the neck making him stop to catch breath.Vermin used his last
3 nails and shot 3 guys in the head.Cropsey snapped some guys neck with his hands.
Rembrandt hit some guys in the head so hard that you could see alot of blood.Vermin
ran at the leader and tackled him taking him and Vermin out the window onto the cement,
Vermin lured the leader to the gas station across the street.When there Vermin like sprayed
an ocean of gasoline on the leader and then threw a lighter at the leader making him burn
and die.Carl put a knife through a Eliminators head.Cowboy got sent out the window hangin
on the ledge.Mercy choked someone with her necklace.Vermin got back to the fight and
helped Cowboy.Cropsey opened the fridge door and smashed a dudes head in the fridge.
Ajax split kicked 2 Eliminators in the chest.An Eliminator got a brick to his head.Swan
smashed a case of beer on a guys head.The fight was over.The Warriors won.
Cowboy-Hey wheres that beer case that was on the table?
Swan-Sorry.
Cropsey-Wheres the leader?
Vermin-Burning.
Rembrandt-Huh...I feel numb.
Ajax-Tsss wimp!
Cropsey-Ok lets eat!(rubs hands together)
Cowboy-Anyone seen my hat?
Carl-Right here!
Cowboy-(grabs hat)Ohh hatty I missed you!
Vermin-"Hatty'?
Swan-Go dump these guys somewhere.
(all the guys except Swan and Mercy go take care of the bodys)
Mercy-So...
Swan-So...
(they start kissing.Seconds later the guys come back)
Vermin-Hey look at them.Cowboy take a picture.
(Cowboy takes a picture and everyon looks to see the image)
Everyone does what they do.
Till part 7!
Part 6:Electrify It
(the next day)
Cowboy-Hey toss me a beer!
Vermin-Right on it.
(Vermin tosses a beer at Cowboy)
Cropsey-(still trying to fix wip cuts)Owww,oww,oww.Someone toss me a cotton ball
and alchohol,NOW!!!!
Rembrandt-There ya go Crop.
Cropsey-(screams like a little bitch)
Ajax-Tsssss...Wimp!
Carl-Hey Im gonna go outside,anyone wanna join me ?
Ajax-I'll join.(walks toward the roof with Carl)
(the 2 walk toward the hotdog stand to buy hotdogs and lemonade)
Ajax-Mmmm.I havent had a hotdog in days!
(After they finish lunch they see some yellow suits running towards them in the fog)
Ajax-Ohhh shit just run!
(the two start to run)
Carl-Lets split up!
Ajax-Suit yourself!Meet back at the hangout!See ya!
(the two just run like hell back to the hangout through allyways)
Ajax-(crashes through the door of the hangout)Huhh...Yellow jackets huh...Running huh.
Vermin-Wheres Carl?
(just as he says that Carl crashes through the window)
Carl-Ohh shit!
Swan-What happened?
Mercy-Yeah what happened?
Vermin-Oh I think this is gonna help.(picks up a knife with a letter tied to it)
(just then the Electric Eliminators walk in the hangout)
Eliminator leader-You guys shot Cyrus.Now ya gonna burn in hell!
Vermin-No we didnt.
(just then Vermin shoots the leader in the arm)
Cowboy-Kill 'em all!!
The fight started.Carl picked up a broken piece of glass and puts it in a Eliminators
head.Ajax kicked some ass,he hit some dude to the ground breaking their legs.Swan
elbowed the leader in the neck making him stop to catch breath.Vermin used his last
3 nails and shot 3 guys in the head.Cropsey snapped some guys neck with his hands.
Rembrandt hit some guys in the head so hard that you could see alot of blood.Vermin
ran at the leader and tackled him taking him and Vermin out the window onto the cement,
Vermin lured the leader to the gas station across the street.When there Vermin like sprayed
an ocean of gasoline on the leader and then threw a lighter at the leader making him burn
and die.Carl put a knife through a Eliminators head.Cowboy got sent out the window hangin
on the ledge.Mercy choked someone with her necklace.Vermin got back to the fight and
helped Cowboy.Cropsey opened the fridge door and smashed a dudes head in the fridge.
Ajax split kicked 2 Eliminators in the chest.An Eliminator got a brick to his head.Swan
smashed a case of beer on a guys head.The fight was over.The Warriors won.
Cowboy-Hey wheres that beer case that was on the table?
Swan-Sorry.
Cropsey-Wheres the leader?
Vermin-Burning.
Rembrandt-Huh...I feel numb.
Ajax-Tsss wimp!
Cropsey-Ok lets eat!(rubs hands together)
Cowboy-Anyone seen my hat?
Carl-Right here!
Cowboy-(grabs hat)Ohh hatty I missed you!
Vermin-"Hatty'?
Swan-Go dump these guys somewhere.
(all the guys except Swan and Mercy go take care of the bodys)
Mercy-So...
Swan-So...
(they start kissing.Seconds later the guys come back)
Vermin-Hey look at them.Cowboy take a picture.
(Cowboy takes a picture and everyon looks to see the image)
Everyone does what they do.
Till part 7!
The one and only!