The Nickel Steaks

[the_gentoo]

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The Nickel Steaks ? Episode 1 by the_gentoo

?Ya know, Lloyd, I think that this is the best nickel steak you ever did!?
Lloyd heard this every time Checker and Bose came for a steak, and that was basically every day. Lloyd owned Lloyd?s Steakhouse, a simple business he set up a month after the Big Alert, in August ?79. It was now May '80.
?Well, you know that you are my best customers!? came Lloyd?s usual reply.
?Anyway, we gotta go,? said Checker, burly and white, ?we gotta sort some stuff out with those Stevedores.?
?Yeah,? said Bose, black and beefy, ?they reckon we owe them dough, but they are just scavenging. Scum.?
?Well, bye, guys,? called Lloyd, as the pair left.
Neither of them had noticed the man sitting at the next table, who promptly left.

The abandoned factory loomed in front of them. Two hours later, Checker and Bose looked at each other, then at the large ?SD? burner on the wall.
?What bulls*** is this!? cried Checker.
?I don?t like it, Check,? said Bose. ?Look up in that boarded up window.?
Sure enough, there were two Stevedores who swiftly turned, the ?SD? visible on their dull brown jackets.
?Who gives a crap!? said Checker, opening the door.
It was dim and quiet in the hangout, but it looked a though everything had just been switched off, simply to scare Checker and Bose.
?Well, well, well,? sneered a drawling voice from the couch. ?If it isn?t Tweedledee and Tweedledum.?
?I only see Tweedledee,? remarked Checker. ?Where?s your Warchief??
?Very funny,? said the voice, Dore, the Warlord. ?Now cough up the kerching.
?We don?t have it,? said Bose quickly.
?Don?t be such a f***ing pussy, Bose,? said Checker. ?We don?t wanna give you it. We don?t owe you jack s***.?
?No. You do. But if you want, we?ll take something other than money. You may go,? said Dore.
?Right?Ok?? said Bose.
?No it is f***ing not!? cried Checker. ?What you gonna do eh? Trash our f***ing apartments??
?Get the hell outta here, Checker.?
?Yeah, Check. We should go,? said Bose.
Dore chuckled as they left.
?Hey, Mack!? called Dore.
A scrawny but serious looking guy came over.
?Thanks for the tip-off. Get Shot and the muscles to trash that s***hole steakhouse. Leave none alive.?

To be continued

[prozium]

Interesting choice in gangs I must say, two gangs that were (as far as we know) not seen in the movie or game.

It's nice to see someone do it and give the unseen gangs a personality. Keep up the good work, I'm looking foreward to the next part

[pozzy74]

good story i cant wait for episod 2  keep on writing dude ill stay tuned boppers adios

[Scotty Rave]

Interesting prologue. I'm guessing Checker and Bose form a gang called The Nickel Steaks. Doubt I could take them seriously with that name but I'm really looking forward to the next bit.

[Vermin16]

yeah. the nickel steaks rule!!!!

[the_gentoo]

The Nickel Steaks - Episode 2 by the_gentoo

?I?m f***ng starved, Bose,? announced Checker. ?Let?s go to Lloyd?s.?
?Yeah, all right man. I just don?t like how the Stevedores simply left it. I ain?t got a good feeling ?bout this.?
?They probably had achange of heart or something. Became religious.?
?I dunno, Check.?

Yellow tape blocked the door. Police and ambulances were all over.
?Aw, s***, Check! I f***ing warned you!? cried Bose.
?Let?s just f***ing go in,? murmured Checker.
He snatched the tape up and threw it on the floor. It was a bloodbath. People had had their heads crumpled in, apparently by crowbars. People had had their throats slit. People had huge gaping wounds in their abdomen.
?Oh, s***,? said Bose.
Checker looked over at the till. There was no money in it.
?Oh, s***, Checker, come over here!? called Bose.
Checker came over. There, in a pool of blood, was Lloyd. Above him, on the wall, was the large green and yellow ?SD? tag. The Stevedores. Suddenly, Lloyd coughed.
?Check! Check!? shouted Bose. ?He?s still alive!?
?Ch-ch-ch-check?? stammered Lloyd. ?B-b-Bose??
?We?re here, Lloyd, man!? said Bose.
?G-g-get Dore for me,? he said.
?We weill, Lloyd. You bet your bottom dollar we will,? said Checker.
?P-p-p-p-please,? stuttered Lloyd.
Lloyd retched, then coughed violently, blood spraying everywhere. He lay still.
?Hey, get outta there!?
A cop had turned up. Checker and Bose walked outside.
?Good. Now get outta here a**holes,? said the cop.
He turned around. The next thing he knew, he was on the floor. He sprang up and faced Checker.
?You?re under arrest for assaulting a police officer!? the cop cried.
?No, I?m f***ing not,? said Checker.
Checker punched the cop in the stomach andthen kneed him in the head. The cop took a swipe wth his baton, but Checker ducked and delivered a blow to the cop?s temple. The cop rose and caught Checker on the chin. He pulled out a pair of cuffs.
?I?m gonna enjoy dragging you down to the precinct.?
All of a sudden, a bat flew out of nowhere and hit the cop in the temple. He fell over. Bose ran towards the cop, grabbed the bat, and beat the cop to death.
?S***, Check, you all right? Why you attack that cop??
?He was a pussy,? replied Checker, getting up. ?Thanks for saving my a**. We should make a gang. Rule the streets. Avenge Lloyd. Kill Dore.?
?Yeah, man,? said Bose. ?You be Warlord.?
?OK. You be Warchief. Warchief of? the Nickel Steaks. In memory of Lloyd's Steakhouse.?

[turnbull_badger]

cool fan fiction, u should check mine out and my poll on the game forum

[turnbull_badger]

nickel steaks rule
goooooooooooooooooooo nickel steaks!

[Scotty Rave]

Smegging awesome new chapter gentoo. It's cool how they got the name and it's noble that they're doing this to avenge their friend. I can't wait to see them bring the gang together.