Baaackkk To The Big C.I., The Warriors 2

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Tell me if you like it
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oh by the way i am moving and im selling my computer, so it'll be a while before my next entry
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IT IS THE BEST. I could not think of a better script.

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hey thats pretty good keep it up.
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best story i ever read on here!!!

poor rembrandt.
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ok thats it im stoppin my fan fic this beats the hell outta mine :lol:
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alright i got to my grandparents computer so heres a little somthing


*****Empty subway station*****
Mercy:oh god oh god oh god ohhh god! i just cant wa...
Hand put over her mouth
Turnbull Soldier: well well well, look what we got here, Mercy, hows the uhhhh.....what were their names, they got wasted by the warriors ummm
gets mouth free,
Mercy:Orphans, but who cares about them, when the warriors come to get me you guys will be dead!!!!
Turnbull takes mercy outside into a bus loaded with about 75-80 gang members
Turnbull leader:Mercy, my dear........you bitch(smashes mercy in the head with an open hand, and mercy gets a little cut on her forehead bleeding quite a bit for a minor cut.
**gets out of bus at turf where about 80 more members were hanging out**
Mercy:ok you kidnapped me, tied me up, and now your gonna kill me.....all cause i dumped you!
turnbull leader:not so much as dumped,more like ran to a bunch of emotional poor people. heh heh heh, someone give me a knife, a rope and a weight, so we can put this ho in the river.
*Turnbull leader drops dead*, from an unmistakable knife Cowboy storms in with 100 more warriors
Cowboy:go ahead mercy run to the train before it takes off, i got these creeps.
cowboy knew he was outnumbered and was gonna die, but he didn't care. his 2 best friends died. ajax is already scheduled to take his place. what good is he to the world.he is just one less. but he fought anyway. and twas a bloody battle. by the time mercy got away the warriors were already losing badly. Mercy hauled @$$

******AT CONEY******
Mercy arrived to Coney. but nobody had heard from cowboy and the other newbloods, days turned to weeks, weeks to months, months to years, it had been 2 years since that night with the turnbulls.and it was one day that something spectacular happened

Warcheif Ajax was giving Fight Lessons to newbloods, and cleon was making plans for his next brawl. vermin, chochise and snow were telling some other newbloods about the horrific night of the Cyrus Meeting back in 79, it was 1981 and not much had changed from coney, except a new coca cola machine on the corner close to where the turf is.
Everything was normal until mercy screamed for joy.

Cowboy walks in the door

Cowboy:Miss me?
Mercy gives him a big hug and puts some thrust into it

Cleon:good to have ya back soldier
Ajax:i don't care, im still warcheif
Cowboy:fine with me Ajax.
Chochise:Great to see ya man
Vermin:what happened? tell us how you made it back!

Cowboy:OK Here it goes............


STAY TUNED FOLKS!!!!! give me the lowdown how was it!?
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this is great please carry on and let me make you a new sig ive got photoshop now!!!
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its turning out real good, keep it up man your doing great!
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gj man, keep it up! :D
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Cowboy:Midway during the brawl i bailed, i was freaked out so i ran and hid, i seen everyone get killed.i went to my cousin Richies apartment and decided for a look change. so i cut my hair a bit shorter than ajax's hair, gave up the stetson and took off my vest.....i lived a normal life till about 2 weeks ago.i seen a turnbull around messing with a little kid, trying to steal her money, i beat up the turnbull and snapped his neck. that little girl was my neice, she was 7.i brought her in and she was playing in my room, she found my stetson and vest and played dressup, my hair was really long again and i was combing it in the mirror and my neice put my hat on, and i realized i left back all u guys.so i put on the vest and checked out how i looked.
the next week i got some train tickets and came back.

Ajax:well.....way to kill 10 minutes but im gonna go patro.....well well well, some chinese friends must be lost, they should be in chinatown. come on cochise lets go show those 3 huns over there who runs coney.

Cochise:ready to rock!

****10 minutes later****

Ajax and Cochise walk in and everybody is holding weapons

Snow:Ghost called.....they're coming.
Cochise:how'd they get out number?
Cleon: who cares, they got a lot of soldiers, and we gotta be ready....Snow, grab some scouts and a couple of muscless and go see what the plan is, when they are hitting us, and check out they're dojo so we can see what their weak poins are

Snow and others leave.


Cochise:Whatdawe do now?
Ajax:yeah?
Vermin:We wait
Cleon:we have to prepare too.

tell me what u think


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more more!! i like no i love it one of the greatest stories of all time!!please continue!!
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Snow:Be quiet they might here us.

snow and 5 newbloods hid in the dojo watching ghost and some others train.

Ting Mow: Ghost, i need to work on my dodging skills, and so do you. we must train hard if we want to beat the warriors.

Ghost looks in shock, because in china it is ilegal to speak your mind, and u must respect your elders.

Ghost snaps his fingers and he is given a knife. Ting Mow goes to run in fear but Ghost threw it at him and got him right in the back of the head.

Wing Yu: Look! ghost! intruders
Yani Wung:Warriors! Get them!!!!

Snow and the newbloods run off, with 10 huns after them
Snow:split up!
all split up, except for one new blood who got beat down by 10 huns. snow looked at the bottle he had for drinking....and he ripped a little part of his pant legs and tied it with an elastic band  and lit it with his match and threw it at the huns.|
Snow: lets go! all the other warriors run to the train and get away
Cleon meets Snow at the hangout.
cleon nods his head in wonder
Snow: they got one of ourts, we got ten of them, and they're coming. we better prepare!!
Cleons: Muscle on the front lines we got huns to take care of!!!
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Hey everyone i decided to do a new chapter! 8)

Cleon fiddled with his headress waiting for the huns to make it to coney then a scout comes in
Scout:hey cleon they are here..
Cleon:how many?
Scout: about 20 less then ours
Cleon:see ghost?
Scout: no i haven't, say cleon why are you not on the front lines??? you are in the hangout.i have never seen you do this before!
Cleon:i got a plan on the roof Tom!
Scout(Tom):ok warcheif no need to use my name!!
suddenly a knife flew past cleon and stuck in the neck of the Scout.
The battle was on and the only 2 in the hangout were Cleon and Ghost
Cleon: thats dirty Ghost, why did you kill him like that....shouldn't you have used your fancy chinese arts?
why do you even want us dead anyway?
Ghost:we want coney for buisness open noodle shops, big cash settlement
Cleon:HAH! like that will happen
Ghost: give it to me now and not only will we let you live, we will love you long time~!!!!!
Cleon:Whatever, i dont have to take anything from you
Cleon punches ghost in the face and goes for another shot but he ducks and spin kicks Cleon in the head. he falls onto the second floor of the hangout in very hurt
Ghost goes ontop of the roof to watch the fight.

*****front line*****
Ajax with a baseball bat is kicking teeth, kicking ass and taking names!
Snow is dealign ard fist to several at a time
Vermin took a few punches but dealt more
Cochise is laying every one in his path out
someone hit snow in the back of the head and Vermin smoked the attacker in the back of the head with a brick
several new bloods were dead, and so were many huns
Vermin: You ok snow???
Snow: fine *punches* i wonder when it will be time for cleon to un leash his plan!
Ajax kicks somebody in the face
Ajax:here cochise take my bat and go see cleon
****Hangout****
Cochise:Cleon you here?
Cleon:yeah im down here ughhghhghhh
Cochise:holy crap here lemme help ya up
Cleon gets up
Cleon: Cochise may i have that bat i just got an even better plan for the roof
Cochise when i say. you come up to the roof with me ok?
Cochise: got it!
****Rooftop****
Cleon: Im back!
Ghost: finally....
Cleon runs at ghost but ghost punches cleon in the stomache cleon retaliates and hits ghost in the mouth busting him open cleon then jumping spinning wheel kick's ghost in the face and knocking him off the roof
and almost killing him.
Cleon yells to cochise from the ladder of the rooftop
Cochise comes in cleon whispers to cochise
Cochise does a screaming war cry and all the warriors retreat into the hangout :shock: :? :badgrin:
all the warriors get on the roof top and lock the door leading to the rooftop
all the huns are screaming and trying to break in
cleon opes a crate which has at least 30 gas jugs all full to the top
Cleon signals the vent and Cowboy And Ajax drop all the gas jugs in the hangout full of Huns via vent
cleon lights ajax//cochises baseball bat on fire and throws it into the vent
there is an explosion and and screams of death.
Cleon: there is a new hangout on the otherside of town we can use
Cochise:good
Ajax and vermin climb down and bar the door
Cowboy uses a pay-phone to report a fire on the hangout
Cops come and arrest all the living huns (very Few including Ghost with his broken neck/spine/skull fracture/broken leg) the warriors get big bucks of insurance and move into the new hangout

***new hangout***
Ajax:man htis place is cool
Cleon:yeah im glad swan remembered to insure the place!
Vermin:i miss him
Cowboy: Rem too
Cochise: and the fox

in the corner of their new hangout, the warriors had a shrine set up to those 3 soldiers who lost their lives from various causes


The end for now



alight guys im back and better than ever. tell me what  you guys think ;D!!!!!! :mrgreen:
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wow, after such a long time, welcome back.

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