my story is 3 groups of warriors going out on patrol,the 3 stories will eventualy collide
7 months before the meeting
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4:07 pm.
Cleon walked up and down the board walk waiting for them.He was wearing his signature headdress and of course his vest.Finally when he was just about to leave he heard voices coming from behind he.Cleon quickly turned around and saw 3 people standing behind him.They were warriors just like him."where the f*ck have you guys been ive been waiting here for 20 minutes!" Cleon yelled.One of the warriors stepped forward,he had a cowboy hat on.He was Cowboy."Sorry Warlord we just got caught up in things ya know,it wont happen again" said Cowboy.
"your damn right it won't." Cleon snapped back. "Rembrant you got the stuff?" he said to one of the other warriors.One warrior with an afro held up a spray can."yes warlord" he said back."good good" said Cleon."now I bet your all wondering why i've called you here".
The biggest warrior at the end grunted."you want us to go out on patrol"
Cleon looked at him"well Ajax looks like you do got some brains after all".
Ajax looked away with an angry look on his face.
"Ok" Cleon said "heres the line up: Rembrant your the tagger,you got more than one can?"."yes warlord" rembrant replied looking in his bag. "ive got 10" ."good" Cleon said again.
Cleon continued on "Cowboy,your the soldier if anything goes down you'll be ready to bop".Cowboy nodded his head.
"Ajax" Cleon said looking at him." heavy muscle protect Rembrant dont let him get wasted,and dont go thinking with your dick like you always do you got it?."ya I got it" said Ajax
"Swan Cleon said."wait" he stopped and looked around."were the hell is Swan?. Ajax spoke up "I told ya he'd never show up".Then from the shadows a figure came out.He was know as Swan."Im here" he said.
Swan took his place in the line.
Cleon continued "Swan, your the leader of this mission,im going up to Harlem with Cochise".Swan nodded.
"Where are we going anyway?" said Ajax.Cleon looked at him and said "you guys are goin to hells kitchen industrieal park, some small time click has been disrespecting the warrior name and I want you to go up there and check it out".
Cleon stepped back."You guys get goin I gotta meet with The Fox.
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Not bad, not bad. Keep it up O2.
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yeah thats pretty good man.
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Civil disobedience is still disobedience.
Civil disobedience is still disobedience.
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Not to bad at all...
Looking forward to reading what happens next
Looking forward to reading what happens next
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okay 
"That's right Warriors, keep walking...Real tough mothers 'aint 'chya? You know, you don't show me much. Why don't you dickheads just walk all the way back home?"
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4:24 pm
The Fox waited for his friends by the wonder wheel.He nervously leaned up against it and took a deep breath.
He looked to the right of him and saw 2 people walking down the street.They were Vermin and Snow.
"Guys we've got to catch the next train to Gunhill,Cleon told me that somthin big is gonna go down in a couple of days and he told us to go down there and check it out." Fox said quickly.
"aww man Gunhill!" Vermin complained. "thats turnbull ac turf,there gonna wreck us!"
Fox replied in a board tone "Cleon said all we gotta do is keep our heads down,stick to the shadows and we shoud be fine"
"Lets get going then" Snow said calmly
"Right" Fox said "c'mon I know a short cut to the subway.
"Hey gunhill's pretty far away what are we gonna do on the way there? Vermin said to Snow
"One sec" Snow said as he picked up a rock and threw it into a window of a store.
The Fox and Vermin stared as he walked into the store and came out with a boom box.Snow,turned it on lifted it to his shoulder.
The store owner started sweeping up the glass shards,he couldnt do anything, after all, they were Warriors.
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4:30 pm
Cochise was making out with a girl inside the warrior hangout.She was ontop of him and they were embraced in a kiss.
"hey Cochise here comes Cleon" one of the newbloods said from across the room.
"oh sh*t!" whisperd Cochise,as he threw the girl off of him and onto the floor.
"thats the last time I go out with you pig" the girl said as she strutted out the back door.
The front door to the hangout flew open and Cleon walked in.
"Cochise didn't I tell you to be ready when I get back"? Cleon bellowed
"yes warlord" awserd Cochise "I was just uhh relaxing thats all"
"well relax later" Cleon said back "we gotta get down to harlem and fast, a couple of our boys have gotten themselves into a bit of trouble.
Cochise smiled at him, harlem was known for its strip clubs "Ok man lets get going"
"Solid" Cleon said as they walked onto the streets and headed for the subway.
4:24 pm
The Fox waited for his friends by the wonder wheel.He nervously leaned up against it and took a deep breath.
He looked to the right of him and saw 2 people walking down the street.They were Vermin and Snow.
"Guys we've got to catch the next train to Gunhill,Cleon told me that somthin big is gonna go down in a couple of days and he told us to go down there and check it out." Fox said quickly.
"aww man Gunhill!" Vermin complained. "thats turnbull ac turf,there gonna wreck us!"
Fox replied in a board tone "Cleon said all we gotta do is keep our heads down,stick to the shadows and we shoud be fine"
"Lets get going then" Snow said calmly
"Right" Fox said "c'mon I know a short cut to the subway.
"Hey gunhill's pretty far away what are we gonna do on the way there? Vermin said to Snow
"One sec" Snow said as he picked up a rock and threw it into a window of a store.
The Fox and Vermin stared as he walked into the store and came out with a boom box.Snow,turned it on lifted it to his shoulder.
The store owner started sweeping up the glass shards,he couldnt do anything, after all, they were Warriors.
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4:30 pm
Cochise was making out with a girl inside the warrior hangout.She was ontop of him and they were embraced in a kiss.
"hey Cochise here comes Cleon" one of the newbloods said from across the room.
"oh sh*t!" whisperd Cochise,as he threw the girl off of him and onto the floor.
"thats the last time I go out with you pig" the girl said as she strutted out the back door.
The front door to the hangout flew open and Cleon walked in.
"Cochise didn't I tell you to be ready when I get back"? Cleon bellowed
"yes warlord" awserd Cochise "I was just uhh relaxing thats all"
"well relax later" Cleon said back "we gotta get down to harlem and fast, a couple of our boys have gotten themselves into a bit of trouble.
Cochise smiled at him, harlem was known for its strip clubs "Ok man lets get going"
"Solid" Cleon said as they walked onto the streets and headed for the subway.
Last edited by Anonymous on Mon May 01, 2006 4:22 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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5:12 pm-hells kitchen
The Warriors got off the train and streached.It had been a long train ride.Ajax flexed his fingers and cracked his knuckles.
"Lets get moving" said Swan and they all started moving down the street
"faggot" Ajax whisperd under his breath as he started walking
Swan ingnored him
"lets just find some of their tags to spray over,that'll teach them not to disrespect the warriors"Swan said to everyone.
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After they had been walking for about 10 minutes Rembrant saw somthing on the wall up ahead.He tapped Swan on the shoulder and pointed to it.
It was a gang tag.I big red and black letters it read FIVE POINTS.Coming out of the top of the burner was a large hand holding 5 playing cards.The 2 cards on each side were normal but the one in the middle was different.It had a picture of a skull with the ace of spades on its forehead,and there was a snake going in the eye hole of the skull and out the mouth.
Everyone was amazed by this artwork exept Rembrant who was unimpressed.
"hey Swan,you wan't me to hit it?" he asked
"ya go ahead" answerd Swan
Rembrant pulled out a red spray can out of his bagand started spraying
When he was finished he stepped back,admired his work and smiled.
The once beautiful gang tag now read THE WARRIORS complete with the skull and wings below it.
"good job man" said Swan "Now lets get m-" he was cut off by a brick flying past his head.
All the warriors turned around and saw 7 gang members wearing black denam vests that had the five points logo on it.All 7 Members were packed with chains,bats and bricks.
"oh [bad word deleted]" said Cowboy "I think we really [bad word deleted]ed 'em off"
"I bet there a bunch of wimps" said Ajax
"YOU MOTHER[bad word deleted]ERS SHOULDN'T HAVE DONE THAT" yelled a five point
"YOUR DEAD!!!!!" yelled another.
All of the Five Points charged at the Warriors.
"Get Ready" said Swan
The first Five Point swung his 2x4 at Swan.He side stepped it,barley missing the deadly blow,then tore up into the gangmembers jaw with an uppercut knocking him unconcious.Rembrant bashed one of them in the face with his empty paint can,making the five point fall to the floor,then got ontop of him and held him down..Ajax grabbed one by the collar and smashed his face up against the wall making a sickening thud.One five point swung his pipe at Cowboys face,He ducked and the pipe hit the wall sending vibrations up the gangmembers arm making him drop the bat.Cowboy then gave him a left hook to the face followed by a straight,knocking him out,he smiled and picked up the pipe.
The Warriors seemed to be winning the fight until one five point kicked Rembrant in the kidney making him fall to the floor,then 2 gangmembers surrounded him and started to kick him on the floor.When Swan and Ajax saw this they ran over to help.Ajax grabbed the first five point from behind while Swan punched him in the gut.By the time that one was knocked out,the other one had turned around.Ajax and Swan smiled at each other before bolth punching the five point once in the face sending him flying back.
Swan helped up Rembrant. "you OK man?" he asked."ya im fine just a little banged up thats all" Rembrant replied.He had a 2 black eyes and a swollen lip.
There was only one Five Point ,and he was the biggest guy they had ever seen
"chicken [bad word deleted] "Ajax said to him.
The five point just smiled at him and pulled out a 7 inch blade
"damn we gotta make this even" Ajax picked up a chain and swung it at him like a whip
The gangmember grabbed the chain and pulled it away from Ajax.
"holy [bad word deleted]" Ajax said as the five point backed him, Swan and Rembrant in the corner.
Just then Swan saw Cowboy sneak up behind the five point with a pipe in his hand.
Cowboy hit the gangmember in the back of the knee's as hard as he could.The five point winced.He turned around and faced Cowboy with an angry look on his face."uh oh" Cowboy whisperd to himself.
The huge thug lifted his knife to stab Cowboy,He closed his eyes and said "I hope this works"
Cowboy gave all his might into this one kick and forced it into the five points groin.The gangmember slunk to the floor crying.
Cowboy opend his eyes and looked down "hey I did it" he said as he kicked the man on the floor knocking him out.
"you uhh saved me from doing it myself" Ajax said.
"Good job man " Rembrant said and patted him on the shoulder.
"c'mon lets get moving" Swan said ruining the moment "were not done here yet"
All the Warriors grabbed weapons,Cowboy kissed his pipe,Ajax kicked the guy on the floor and took back the chain,Rembrant lifted a bat off the floor and Swan picked up the knife in the thugs hands.
"lets go" Swan said and they all started walking down the road.
Every Warrior had done well,They each had a smile on their face.But Cowboy.... He had the biggest smile of them all
The Warriors got off the train and streached.It had been a long train ride.Ajax flexed his fingers and cracked his knuckles.
"Lets get moving" said Swan and they all started moving down the street
"faggot" Ajax whisperd under his breath as he started walking
Swan ingnored him
"lets just find some of their tags to spray over,that'll teach them not to disrespect the warriors"Swan said to everyone.
                             ***
After they had been walking for about 10 minutes Rembrant saw somthing on the wall up ahead.He tapped Swan on the shoulder and pointed to it.
It was a gang tag.I big red and black letters it read FIVE POINTS.Coming out of the top of the burner was a large hand holding 5 playing cards.The 2 cards on each side were normal but the one in the middle was different.It had a picture of a skull with the ace of spades on its forehead,and there was a snake going in the eye hole of the skull and out the mouth.
Everyone was amazed by this artwork exept Rembrant who was unimpressed.
"hey Swan,you wan't me to hit it?" he asked
"ya go ahead" answerd Swan
Rembrant pulled out a red spray can out of his bagand started spraying
When he was finished he stepped back,admired his work and smiled.
The once beautiful gang tag now read THE WARRIORS complete with the skull and wings below it.
"good job man" said Swan "Now lets get m-" he was cut off by a brick flying past his head.
All the warriors turned around and saw 7 gang members wearing black denam vests that had the five points logo on it.All 7 Members were packed with chains,bats and bricks.
"oh [bad word deleted]" said Cowboy "I think we really [bad word deleted]ed 'em off"
"I bet there a bunch of wimps" said Ajax
"YOU MOTHER[bad word deleted]ERS SHOULDN'T HAVE DONE THAT" yelled a five point
"YOUR DEAD!!!!!" yelled another.
All of the Five Points charged at the Warriors.
"Get Ready" said Swan
The first Five Point swung his 2x4 at Swan.He side stepped it,barley missing the deadly blow,then tore up into the gangmembers jaw with an uppercut knocking him unconcious.Rembrant bashed one of them in the face with his empty paint can,making the five point fall to the floor,then got ontop of him and held him down..Ajax grabbed one by the collar and smashed his face up against the wall making a sickening thud.One five point swung his pipe at Cowboys face,He ducked and the pipe hit the wall sending vibrations up the gangmembers arm making him drop the bat.Cowboy then gave him a left hook to the face followed by a straight,knocking him out,he smiled and picked up the pipe.
The Warriors seemed to be winning the fight until one five point kicked Rembrant in the kidney making him fall to the floor,then 2 gangmembers surrounded him and started to kick him on the floor.When Swan and Ajax saw this they ran over to help.Ajax grabbed the first five point from behind while Swan punched him in the gut.By the time that one was knocked out,the other one had turned around.Ajax and Swan smiled at each other before bolth punching the five point once in the face sending him flying back.
Swan helped up Rembrant. "you OK man?" he asked."ya im fine just a little banged up thats all" Rembrant replied.He had a 2 black eyes and a swollen lip.
There was only one Five Point ,and he was the biggest guy they had ever seen
"chicken [bad word deleted] "Ajax said to him.
The five point just smiled at him and pulled out a 7 inch blade
"damn we gotta make this even" Ajax picked up a chain and swung it at him like a whip
The gangmember grabbed the chain and pulled it away from Ajax.
"holy [bad word deleted]" Ajax said as the five point backed him, Swan and Rembrant in the corner.
Just then Swan saw Cowboy sneak up behind the five point with a pipe in his hand.
Cowboy hit the gangmember in the back of the knee's as hard as he could.The five point winced.He turned around and faced Cowboy with an angry look on his face."uh oh" Cowboy whisperd to himself.
The huge thug lifted his knife to stab Cowboy,He closed his eyes and said "I hope this works"
Cowboy gave all his might into this one kick and forced it into the five points groin.The gangmember slunk to the floor crying.
Cowboy opend his eyes and looked down "hey I did it" he said as he kicked the man on the floor knocking him out.
"you uhh saved me from doing it myself" Ajax said.
"Good job man " Rembrant said and patted him on the shoulder.
"c'mon lets get moving" Swan said ruining the moment "were not done here yet"
All the Warriors grabbed weapons,Cowboy kissed his pipe,Ajax kicked the guy on the floor and took back the chain,Rembrant lifted a bat off the floor and Swan picked up the knife in the thugs hands.
"lets go" Swan said and they all started walking down the road.
Every Warrior had done well,They each had a smile on their face.But Cowboy.... He had the biggest smile of them all
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6:03-gunhill
A train pulled up to the station in gunhill,The doors slid open and 3 warriors got out,The Fox,Vermin and Snow.
"ok man what now?" Vermin said to Fox.
The Fox ignored him,he never really like Vermin, he only seemed to ask questions and complain.
"I know a club that the turnbull's hang out at,let's jump one of them and find out about this big thing everyone talks about,c'mon its this way" Fox said
"hey what if we run into trouble?" Vermin asked
The Fox ignored him,the last thing he needed was Vermin nagging him the whole time.
Snow turned on his radio to "super sounds of the 70's" and smiled.
All 3 Warriors walked down the middle of the street in a line,the song 'Paranoid' by Black Sabbath was starting to play on the radio.
The Fox thought he heard a noise behind him,he looked over his shoulder and thought he saw the outline of a school bus.Then he rememberd,the turnbull's drove around in a bus!
"guys move faster" Fox said quickly, If they reached the end of the street they could crawl under the fence.
"whadda mean im goin at my own pace" Vermin said.
Just then the bus turned on its headlights,filling the street with light.
"RUN!!!" Fox screamed as the bus drove full speed at them.......
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A train pulled up to the station in gunhill,The doors slid open and 3 warriors got out,The Fox,Vermin and Snow.
"ok man what now?" Vermin said to Fox.
The Fox ignored him,he never really like Vermin, he only seemed to ask questions and complain.
"I know a club that the turnbull's hang out at,let's jump one of them and find out about this big thing everyone talks about,c'mon its this way" Fox said
"hey what if we run into trouble?" Vermin asked
The Fox ignored him,the last thing he needed was Vermin nagging him the whole time.
Snow turned on his radio to "super sounds of the 70's" and smiled.
All 3 Warriors walked down the middle of the street in a line,the song 'Paranoid' by Black Sabbath was starting to play on the radio.
The Fox thought he heard a noise behind him,he looked over his shoulder and thought he saw the outline of a school bus.Then he rememberd,the turnbull's drove around in a bus!
"guys move faster" Fox said quickly, If they reached the end of the street they could crawl under the fence.
"whadda mean im goin at my own pace" Vermin said.
Just then the bus turned on its headlights,filling the street with light.
"RUN!!!" Fox screamed as the bus drove full speed at them.......
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Last edited by Anonymous on Thu May 04, 2006 11:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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