warriors poem

[Vermin16]

Part 8: Fox

Really big Afro
filled with brain,
His life be well
if it not for that train.
He made the orphans
feel good about themselves,
filling there heads
with nonsense tales.
A legend he remains
for ever and ever,
just coming short
in this endless endever

themselves and tales. Perfect execution of the slant rhyme.

[andy_man]

Lincoln

This girl named Lincoln
Has the name of a guy
I've never met her
But she is a cutie pie
Girlfriend of Cleon
Must be on alert
Met up with some Huns
They called her a twerp
Lincoln got mad
Really really mad
Eyes of red
Ran faster than her dad
Kick to the face
Punch to the gut
The last Hun
Called her a ****
Reachs in her purse
Pulls out the mace
Aims to stun
Soaked right in the face
Kick to the balls
Knee in the face
Now the Huns know
Not to get in her space


OH YEAH!
Lincoln own Huns
My first poem(About the Warriors), gimme your thoughts

[BaseballFury100]

haha, great one andy!


Chochise
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named after a cheif
whos head was held high
good thing he never died
on the trip to the lizzies
sexy pad
this is not good this is bad
his life flashed before him at the flick of a knife
so get lost grim reaper and take your sythe

[andy_man]

Thanks
Nice job, i like the sythe part with the grim rapper err... reaper

[All Grown Up]

Part 10: Cowboy

A cowboy hat
is what defines him.
a road unwinding
not to be grim.
vermin thought
they where some desperste dudes.
but cowboy says
that we was too.
a magnitude of greatness
not to be sat,
all defined
by a simple cowboy hat

[All Grown Up]

That concludes the poems. I would like to think everyone for all of the positive feedback that I have got from this, and I loved all of the other poems in batween, awsome!

now you can vote for your favorite poem hare: http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=4935.0

[Cubs On The Red Carpet]

I gots one !

Vermin

Loyal to the end,
Sacrafice in front of a gun,
Even when in danger,
He comes out having fun,
He's funny, he's crazy,
He always complains,
But when a fight begins,
He never refrains,
Vermin is loyal,
Vermin is great,
He'll stay with the Warriors,
'Til he is 78!

this one  is my favourite nice work vermin2_2_

[ajax is coolest]

i got one

hi hats

hi hats with there hats so high,
almost touching the sky,
with there leader fat and big,
he looks like a fat pig,
battles they have won many times,
thats why people think there killer mimes

i did it
tell me what you think

[Ajax_41]

hmm... :doubt:

[ajax is coolest]

ok i'm not so good at writing poems.

[Mercy88]

Write one about Mercy 

[Jigsaw]

Write one about Mercy 

Why Not??

Mercy

She wears a smirk,
Her hair wavy and black,
Her old home, with the Orphans,
She shall not go back,
Shes with the Warriors,
With them she lives,
They still go out to soldier,
Encouragement she gives,
She stands by The Warriors,
She will to the end,
The Warriors love Mercy,
She, the Warriors will always defend.

[All Grown Up]

Write one about Mercy 

Why Not??

Mercy

She wears a smirk,
Her hair wavy and black,
Her old home, with the Orphans,
She shall not go back,
Shes with the Warriors,
With them she lives,
They still go out to soldier,
Encouragement she gives,
She stands by The Warriors,
She will to the end,
The Warriors love Mercy,
She, the Warriors will always defend.

No Offence at all, It was a grerat poem Vermin_2_2, but you kinda sounded like yoda on that one, when you said Encouragement she gives, with them she lives, and she, the warriors deffend,lol

[Mercy08]

I thought it was good! 8)

[Jigsaw]

Part 5: Vermin

Here he is
all balled up,
He doesn't like trains
and he wont shut up.
Running and running
down an endless road,
holding a bomb
about to explode.
as heroes, and legends
emerge from this clan
God may wait
to decide his plan.

One and Only, yeah, sure mine sounded like 'Yoda'. Cough Star Wars nerd cough. But I didn't comment how this makes NO SENSE!! Endless road? Bomb about to explode?? What is this all about!?