The Warriors retold in verse

[Cowboy606]

no worries mushroom head, just a misunderstanding. props again on the verse fly.

[BTW A.K.A the killer household appliance]

thank you cowboy606 and thank your mushroomhead for ending the argument

p.s i dont care whether your gay or not your gonna do it or the bird gets it!!! lol jk

[Jigsaw]

thank you cowboy606 and thank your mushroomhead for ending the argument

p.s i dont care whether your gay or not your gonna do it or the bird gets it!!! lol jk

Oh no he didn't. Bobo, don't make me bust a cap in your ass. LOL. No, I'm not very good at the rapper gansta type. So.. yeah. Anyways, maybe I better just stop posting here. Suprised Fly hasn't shot me yet.. :badgrin:

[Fly]

No, guys, it's cool.  At least you kept my thread at the top for a while!

[Fly]

OK, it's poetic licence.

BUT I'm amazed no one has spotted the mistake (or let's call it an inaccuracy) in this poem.

Who's gonna be first? 

[Kujo_87]

OK, it's poetic licence.

BUT I'm amazed no one has spotted the mistake (or let's call it an inaccuracy) in this poem.

Who's gonna be first?

I don't know. I see some small details were skipped but thats understandable. The only thing that comes to mind for me is that you reffered to Cleon as "brave 'chief" although he's Warlord and Swan is Warchief, but I'm doubtful.

But this is a great piec of poetry none-the-less. =D>

[Fly]

Thanks, Kujo.  No, that's not it, it's something more specific than that.  When I wrote that, I didn't have the film to refer to as I'd lent it to a friend.  When he returned it, we watched it again and ..... duh!

[Kujo_87]

AAAAWWWWWW! I still can't see it! how 'bout a hint?

[Fly]

AAAAWWWWWW! I still can't see it! how 'bout a hint?

Location, location, location.

[Kujo_87]

DUH!!! ](*,) You said that Mercy meets Swan at Union Square instead of the 96th street station,,I feel like an ass now!

[Daddy Cool]

woo wee this poem is good,real good! if you sell poems one day ill buy all of em somebody give her karma for me 8)

[Fly]

DUH!!! ](*,) You said that Mercy meets Swan at Union Square instead of the 96th street station

That's the one!

Union Square had to go in!  And try fitting "96th Street Station" into a line, it just hasn't got the rhythm!  Ahhh, poetic licence is a great thing .....


Surprised no one else spotted it though.

[Kujo_87]

DUH!!! ](*,) You said that Mercy meets Swan at Union Square instead of the 96th street station

That's the one!

Union Square had to go in!  And try fitting "96th Street Station" into a line, it just hasn't got the rhythm!  Ahhh, poetic licence is a great thing .....


Surprised no one else spotted it though.

SURPRISED! Why? you think I a'int wit it?! Well I got a heavy rep,you mess wit me and you'll find that out!


J/K Fly You're right, 96th Street station is a mouthful, and once again great poem!

[shell]

knowin how my ADD is i would have called it a totally different street name.i couldnt have wrote anything like that in a million years