COWBOY RULES VS POZZY74

[cowboy rules]

The topic is : 'Rumble in Coney'

Rules: No Game referances. You can use any gang you like. 400 Word Minimum

Judge: Vermin76

Deadline: 2nd July

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[cowboy rules]

Jaques stood in the doorway to his gangs hangout. The sky was clear and the air was warm. The guys were already in the hangout, relaxing. Jaques pushed the heavy mtal door open. He saw 5 of the guys sitting round a table playing cards and the rest were doing thir own thing.
"Yo Jaques!" Chase shouted. Chase was his second in command, a trust worthy soldier who backed down from nobody.
"Hey man" Jaques replied. The stripy tops of the JSB's were all around Jaques now. More people had entered the hangout. Jaques approached Richie and Sean. He called Jaques over too.
"Tonight we hit Coney Island" He said simply to them. He saw Richies jaw drop
"Coney Island?? As in the Warriors's Coney Island?? Are you fuckin' insane?"
"What the hells so special about these Warriors? They got passed the Turnbulls, Furies, Punks and those lame ass Orphans who practically nobodys heard of. And weve kicked all their asses before! Lets see what the Warriors can do against a real team"
".......Sounds like a plan" Sean said
"Hell yeah it sound like a plan. We can get the 9 oclock train, by then it'll be dark and we can take 'em by surprise." Chase said
"Okay, I'll tell the guys" Jaques told them. He then walked over and stood up on the table. Everybody was here now, except the patrols. He could tell them later.
"Hey!! Listen here" Everyone fell silent and turned to Jaques "Tonight....were goin to Coney Island to show these Warriors whose boss!" He shouted. A few murmurs came from the crowd, then Sammy spoke up. He was always looking for a fight
"Yeah!! Lets get these assholes, were the number one team in NYC, and no punk ass rejects from Coney is takin that away from us!!" He shouted. It was met by a roar of approval from the Jones Street Boys.
"We go for the train tonight at 9 so be here at 8:30. We leave as a unit" Jaques said stepping off the table with a smile. Tonight, Coney would be his.

3 Hours later......

The mass of striped tops stood on the train station platform awaiting the train. Jaques could see some of the men were nervous. He was slightly too. He knew it would be hard but they could do it.

"Remember these guys are pussies, we can take 'em" He said trying to fire up the men "Weve beaten the Punks, AC's, Furies, Hi Hats and the Van Courtland Rangers. These guys aint even worth shit!" He said as the train rumbled into the station. They got on and took up nearly a full carriage. In 20 minutes they would be there, ready for battle. Jaques sat in silence, listening to the rattling of the train. Eventually they pulled up in Coney.

"Alright, stay together, and try not to get split up. Remember we aint on home soil." Jaques said. He walked forward and heard the men following behind him. They walked down a flight of steps and saw four Warriors standing in the middle of the street. One held a bottle of beer in his hand, and was wearin what looked like a cowboy hat. The other three had long hair down to their shoulders. The Warriors looked up and saw the JSB's standing there. The one with the cowboy hat stood forward.

"What the fuck do you think you're doin' here?" He shouted.
"Were comin' to take this shit hole off of ya!" Jaques shouted back
".....Haha, that'll be right" The Warrior said. He took another step forward then looked at his soldiers. The Warrior then lifted the bottle up and threw it with force at Jaques, just missing his head
"GO!! RUN!!" He shouted, and turning away from the JSB's, he sped up the street.
"Get them!!" Jaques shouted running after the 4 men. Jaques feet pounded the street as he tried to catch up with the Warriors. They turned a corner and came to a long boardwalk. He ran up the steps and continued to chase after the 4 Warriors. He stopped when he got onto the top of the boardwalk. The four Warriors had turned into 50. He stared at the long haired one at the front. The guy stepped forward to meet Jaques half way. Jaques done the same.
"......What do you want?" The Warrior asked
"You're turf" Jaques told him, not leaving his gaze
"Well I'll give you 2 choices. One : Walk away off our turf back to wherever the hell you came from. Or Two: We kick you off our turf" He told Jaques
"Hmph.....you're pretty stubborn. But I think I'll go with.....number 3 :Takin' your fuckin' turf off of ya" Jaques said. And with that the fight started. Jaques punched the Warrior on the nose, sending him stumbling backwards. He heard the two teams running at each other now. The Warrior swung a hard kick at Jaques, catching him in the mouth, but Jaques was ready. He retaliated with a hard elbow to his enemies jaw, sending him spinning to the ground. He was about to swing for the Warrior with the cowboy hat, when he felt a hard blow to the back of his head. He fell forward and landed hard on the wooden floor. All he could see were feet, as he tried to get back up. He saw a Warrior standing above him and flew at him, taking him to ground. Jaques jumped on him, pounding his face with his fists. Blood spilled onto the ground and the Warrior stopped moving. Jaques jumped up and ran for the leader again. He grabbed him by the hair and headbutted him in the nose again, squirting blood everywhere. He was then attacked by 4 more Warriors. He fought to stay up but was overpowered and thrown to the ground. Jaques curled up into a little ball and tried to withstand the beating. Lying on the ground he could see his men scattering, running from the battle. They had deserted him. They had lost. They continued to kick Jaques and stomp on his, already badly beaten head. He heard the leader stopping the men. The sea breeze blew against his face, and he could hear the waves in the distance. He knew what was coming. The Warrior Leader had to show other teams what would happen if they tried to invade Coney. Jaques would have done the same. Soon his death would be on the radio and no one would mess with the Warriors again.

"Waste him" He heard a distant voice say. The next minute Jaques felt a huge blow on his head and felt the warm blood run down his face. He stopped breathing.



THE END

[MiddleMan07]

Ouch!

they sure showed those damn J.S.B's!!

[CAZ]

wow, good writing but.....wow........that was violent!

[pozzy74]

here it is i hope you enjoy it  its very sad


Rumble in Coney

It was 3 am. Coney was quit when 3 terriers were shouting the warriors out. The warriors awoke and chased the terriers to an alley.

Swan:  alright what do you fu*ks think your doing

There were only 15 warriors

Terrier#1: well you know you guys wasted lobster

Terrier#2: he was our leader man

Vermin: he killed our sprayer Rembrandt

Terrier#2:So were gonna kill you

Snake: so you bring three guys to kill us

Terrier#3: nope maybe you should look behind you because they?ll be here in about ten seconds

Foreman: a set up now your gonna really die

Terrier#2: here they come

Three vans pull up full of terriers about 40 in total

Terrier#4: get them!

The warriors were fighting well until they were kind of losing. Then snow comes running round the corner with 100 more warriors

Snow: hey terriers there our gang

The terriers look

Cochise: let?s get em

They run at them and kick there ass one terrier gets away

Out of a distance

Unknown: hey you faggots

Cochise: Ajax how?d you get out

Ajax: long story

Swan: who cares about you rite now I think we should go down to terriers hood n take them out

Cochise: no let them come here ill call masia to tell the DJ to arrange the fight at Coney beach

Swan: ok

Cochise goes to the phone

Masia: hello

Cochise: hey it?s the warriors

Masia: ah the guys who were good, real good

Cochise: and we still are? anyway we need you to send a word for the terriers to come down so we can waste them they killed our member he was our sprayer

Masia: you know if Cyrus were here this wouldn?t happen

Cochise: I know but it?s important

Masia: this time ok it?ll be tomorrow

Cochise: thanks

Masia: ok bye

The warriors are all standing out side Cochise runs up

Cochise: there coming tomorrow

All: yeah!!

Swan: come on its 6 am lets get sleep

All: yeah!!

They sleep

Cowboy awakes he looks at the clock which say 2pm

Cowboy: crap? EVERYONE WAKE UP THERE GONNA BE HER ABOUT AN HOUR!

They all wake up and head down to Coney beach

They stand there waiting with about 100 warriors

There were about 200 terriers and they walked up to them and swan had a flash because he walked exactly like Luther

Swan: rite is we gonna do this

Frost (the terriers leader): ok but your gonna lose

Swan: waste this trash warriors

They all run into each other all around was people falling in death it was a bloodbath. cowboy seen swan getting wasted he ran over and got stabbed and died.

Vermin: no cowboy

He runs over and wastes the guy that did it and kicks the guy off swan

Then a guy puts a claw hammer through his chest. And Tim the newblood got wasted
The total left was 59 vs. 127 they keep brawling

Cut scene

Masia: riffs

Riffs: yeah right!

Masia: some close friends are gonna fight today there name is the warrior

There was a slight mumble

Masia: 20 of you go and help them out

Masia: now go

Cut back scene

The fight continues and swan gets stabbed in the stomach Ajax runs over and wastes the guy

Swan: Ajax (shivering)

Ajax: yeah warlord

Swan: I know you never liked me so if you make it out you can be leader

He dies

Ajax: you pussy?s are really dead now!

Ajax runs back in the fight and wastes about ten in one go. Total at this time about 36 vs. 81. The riffs look down from the top of the hill and run down and waste about 28 terriers and they waste 2 riffs leaving an even match of 53 all the fight continues Ajax is beating up frost he jumps on his head breaking his neck and dying   

Ajax: that?s for Rembrandt, swan, vermin and cowboy bitch

Cochise: Ajax behind you man

Ajax turns around and kicks the terrier in the face and stomps on his throat

Ajax: thanks

Snow beats down about another 6 leaving the total of 16 warriors, 9 riffs and 17 terriers. the riffs wastes another 7 terriers the warriors get wasted down to 6, the riffs down to 7 and the terriers down to 10. Still the 3 main warriors Ajax, Cochise and snow. 2 soldiers. 1 newblood. Snow, Cochise and Ajax waste another two each and the riffs waste 1. A new blood gets stabbed and 1 soldier gets wasted. Finally 1 terrier 4 warriors and 4 riffs they run at him

Ajax: STOP!... I want to deal with this pussy

All: ok

Ajax punches his nose up and he dies

Ajax: right every one is out of breath so let?s get outa here before the cops show up come on too riffs

They all run off and talk about starting the gang back up

The end

[cowboy rules]

Not bad pozzy, not bad at all. I guess its up to vermin76 now lol

[CAZ]

i would pick cowboy rules if i were a judge. his story was a bit better.

[vermin76]

after viewing both stories with careful observation i find this contest very close.i find in favour of pozzy74 by a very narrow margin.your story was very good cowboy rules and you do have talent.congratulations pozzy74

[cowboy rules]

Hey well done pozzy, I think you deserved it too. Okay, we'll have the next fixtures up very soon. Conrats pozzy!

[warlord jp]

both storys were great, good work guys!!

[pozzy74]

hey i won  but also a well done to cowboy rules for doing an exelent story