Rememberance of Fox & Cleon

[Oxygen]

I think the story is really good and its definitly long enough since its about 7 pages .But the only thing I don't like is that Crospey joined the gang,I just cannot picture that.

[joe123abc]

Well,if you read the very second story in the series,Cropsey gives Swan his knife out of loyalty.Thats why Cropsey joined the gang,LOYALTY.does that answer your question?

[warrior swan]

man this story is awesome!! i cant wait for more of chapter 3!!

[joe123abc]

Next ones almost done guys!

[joe123abc]

War Cheif why dosent joey become a member he could get lots of Karma from me.

                            Well wheres the bunch of Karma?

[Furies4life]

LOL Keep writing and posting more and it will come

[joe123abc]

what do ya mean keep writing!im writing a third chapter!Ive been writing this story for like a year!Im just kidding man!

[joe123abc]

ALMOST DONE!

[joe123abc]

ALLLLLLLLMMMOOOOOSSSSSSSTTTTTTT  DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[joe123abc]

WARNING:This next story was my brothers idea,so it might suck,but not really.





                                            IM JUST KIDDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[R3mbrandtfan]

I'm liking the story keep up the good work joe :p

[joe123abc]

Thanks.

[joe123abc]

Guys guy guys,Its Up!Or it will be up!This story is sorta makes you feel bad for someone if ya know what i mean!

[War Chief]

Joey's sent this:

So Your The Famous Warriors



                      (a few days later)

                      Vermin-Heys guys I'll be right back,Im gonna go get some food.

                      (Vermin goes to the grocery store)

                      Vermin-Lets see,hmmm,pepperoni or salami,mmm,I'll just take both.

                      (after a half hour he walks out and then some chick walks up to him and kisses
                      him)

                      Vermin-Holy shit!

                      Lizzy leader-Hey Warrior,we heard you didnt shoot Cryus.

                      Vermin-At least one gang in This town beside the Riffs knows that!

                      Lizzy leader-See ya 'round...babe.

                      Vermin-I'd like that.(does that smile that says you like someone)

                      (She gives him a sweet smile back)

                      Obvioulsy they like eachother!

                      Vermin-Can I have your number?

                      Lizzy leader-Sure.

                    (she writes her number on the inside of Vermins vest)

                    Vermin-Thanks.

                      Lizzy leader-No problem babe.

                      Vermin-Well, uhh I'll see ya.(his cheeks start getting red=embarrased)

                      Lizzy leader-Groovy.

                      Vermin-Or uhh are you goin to the subway right now?

                    L. leader-Yeah.

                    Vermin- I could walk you there if you want.

                    L. leader-Alright,lets go.

                    Vermin-So uhh whats your name?

                    L.leader-My names Malory.

                    Vermin-I do Love that name,well Im Vermin.

                    L. leader-I always thought vermin was another name for a rat!

                    Vermin-Tsss.

                    (45 minutes pass and they finally reached the subway)

                    Vermin-Well we're here.So-

                  (Before he could finish his sentence she kisses him)

                  Malory-Call me sometime.

                  Vermin-Of course!

                  Malory-Bye.

                  Vermin- Bye.

                  (the subway leaves And Vermin walks to the hangout with the groceries)

                  Cowboy- Finally hes back!

                  Swan-Where were you?

                  Vermin-Ahh a long line at the store,man.

                  Ajax-What food did ya get?

                  Vermin-Lets see,bread,meats,beer,ice cream,and 10 Hershey Bars.

                  Cropsey-Cool.

                  Ajax-Lets eat!

                Cowboy-Hey Swan toss me a hershey bar,Im not that hungry.

                Swan-Sure.( gives Cowboy a Hershey Bar)

                Ajax-(takes big bite of sandwhich)It took ya an hour and forty five minute to get
                1 loaf of bread,6 lunch meats,beer,a tub of ice cream,and 10 god damn chocolate
                bars?

                Vermin-No shit.

                Ajax-Meet any strange wool?

                Vermin-Hell Yes!

                (Ajax got all excited)

                Ajax-Are you freakin serious?!What was she like you son of a bitch?

                Vermin-Oh boy was she hot!

                Ajax-Get her number,huh,huh!C'mon be honest!

                Vermin-Yep!And I aint givin it to you!

                Ajax-Does she at least have a "friend"?

                Vermin-A bunch of 'em!

                Ajax-Gesus Christ!Keep talkin!

                Vermin-Hey,If its alright with Swan,I'll bring you,and the guys up there!

                Cowboy-(on his knees)Oh please Swan!

                Swan-Fine.

                Cropsey-If anyone comes to jap you,you and Mercy just run!

                Ajax-Cut this shit!Lets Go!!!!!!!!!!

                (So all the guys except Swan and Mercy leave to the Lizzies hangout)

                  Mercy-Lets go for a walk.

                  Swan-OK.

                  (they both leave the hangout)

                  Mercy-Man your always grabbin me by the arm,cant you hold my hand or somethin?

                  Swan-Im not that type of pers-

                  (mercy kisses him,then they both end up holding hands)

                  Mercy-Im hungry,lets get somethin.

                  Swan-So am I.

                  (while walking,Mercy pulls out that flower thing Swan gives to her at the end of the
                  movie)

                  Swan-You still have that?

                  Mercy-Yeah,I love it.

                  Swan-Tss...

                  Mercy-Are You alright,you look worried?

                  Swan-Im just worried about the guys,ya know,if they get hurt.

                  (Swan and Mercy eat somewhere)

                  Vermin-Alright boys,this door unlocks the hottest chicks ever!

                  Cropsey-Oh man.

                  Vermin-Drumroll please!

                  (Ajax drumrolls on Cowboys head)

                    Vermin-Open sesame!

                    The door opens,and The Warriors are amazed because the chicks are so hot!

                    Malory-Hey Vermin!

                    Vermin-He-llo.

                    (all the Warriors except Vermin got 3 Lizzies to "handle")

                    Back to Coney.

                    Mercy-Do you like me,or love me Swan?

                    Swan-What would you want me to say?

                    Obviously his answer was the second one.

                    (Mercy smiles,then kisses Swan)

                    Mercy-Do you like that?

                  Swan-Yep.

                  (Just then a cop car pulls up)

                  Cop-Hey come 'ere you lousy hoods!

                  Swan-C'mon lets go!

                  (The cops chase Swan and Mercy until they get to the subway)

                  Cop-Your going down chick!

                  Swan-Mercy!You pigs let her go!

                  Sadly,Mercy gets tooken away.

                  Swan-(talking under his breath)No freakin way.

                  (Swan walks back to the hangout with watery eyes)

                  Vermin-Ladies we should get going.

                  Ajax-Who you calling lady pal?

                    Vermin-Just lets go!

                    So they take the subway home.

                    (Swan was sitting on the floor,leaning against the wall,tears running down his cheeks)

                    Vermin-(crashes hangout doors open)Man that was some party!

                    They all pause to look at Swan crying.Just then they realizied what had happenend.

                      Ajax-(whispering to the guys but not Swan)Guys were gonna get her back,as soon
                      as Swan goes to bed,we're goin.

                      Cowboy-Ok.

                      Vermin-Alright.

                      Cropsey-For Swan.

                      Finally,Swan stands up,walks to the guys,and for some odd reason hugs Ajax.

                      Ajax-Im so sorry man,sorry for everything I've done,she'll be alright,trust me.

                                        Till the next story buddies!

[Furies4life]

Amazing I like it .