"the beginning." (maybe)

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Fri Jan 28, 2005 2:47 am

a young hoodlum about 19, 20 maybe, is escorted into his new home an 8x10 cell at rikers island! he's blonde, kinda tough looking, a little scared. this is his first bit. he shudders when door slams behind him, and just then he notices he is not alone, he has a cellmate! sitting against the wall in the shadows on the bottom bunk is a large dark figure. the dark figure calls out what the fuck is that on your hand? he's refering to a small W on the back of the new guy's hand. the young hood gathers all his courage and shouts warriors, from coney! the dark figure snickers a little bit and snorts and then replies what the fuck do you know about warriors? the real warriors. the figure slides out from the bottom bunk and the shadows, stands up, and turns to go to the sink and the youngster see's the tattoo's on the back of the older inmate, across the top shoulder to shoulder was "warriors" in old english, across the bottom was "ajax" also in old english. it struck him like a bolt of lightning he knew who this was, could it be? everybody in our hood knows about the 9 who went to the bronx for a big meeting back in the day, and got blamed for some shit they didn't do and got through miles of enemy hood just to get home, and beat-ass all the way! hell yeah they were famous in our neighborhood, you better know, especially if you are a warrior! it's folklore! ajax turns around and says i'll tell you about the warriors!

LATEM · Post by **LATEM** » Fri Jan 28, 2005 2:41 pm

soldierheavymuscle wrote:a young hoodlum about 19, 20 maybe, is escorted into his new home an 8x10 cell at rikers island! he's blonde, kinda tough looking, a little scared. this is his first bit. he shudders when door slams behind him, and just then he notices he is not alone, he has a cellmate! sitting against the wall in the shadows on the bottom bunk is a large dark figure. the dark figure calls out what the f*ck is that on your hand? he's refering to a small W on the back of the new guy's hand. the young hood gathers all his courage and shouts warriors, from coney! the dark figure snickers a little bit and snorts and then replies what the f*ck do you know about warriors? the real warriors. the figure slides out from the bottom bunk and the shadows, stands up, and turns to go to the sink and the youngster see's the tattoo's on the back of the older inmate, across the top shoulder to shoulder was "warriors" in old english, across the bottom was "ajax" also in old english. it struck him like a bolt of lightning he knew who this was, could it be? everybody in our hood knows about the 9 who went to the bronx for a big meeting back in the day, and got blamed for some sh*t they didn't do and got through miles of enemy hood just to get home, and beat-ass all the way! hell yeah they were famous in our neighborhood, you better know, especially if you are a warrior! it's folklore! ajax turns around and says i'll tell you about the warriors!

Not bad, not bad at all. You know, I wonder how they are going to start off. They must include some interesting introduction linking the original bunch with these warriors from the future. The big question that I always asked to myself is, will there be some sort of leader in the gang from the original group, like Swan or Ajax? I mean, that would really rock.

Irishfan · Post by **Irishfan** » Fri Jan 28, 2005 3:13 pm

I'd love to see something like that but that would bring the movie into the realm of Sequel so I can see them trying to avoid it. Pity

Lizzie_Chief · Post by **Lizzie_Chief** » Fri Jan 28, 2005 3:22 pm

Pretty good! Are you going to write the next part of it or even the whole thing!?!

Irishfan · Post by **Irishfan** » Fri Jan 28, 2005 4:09 pm

I think I see were your going with that. We write our own story?

tomboy · Post by **tomboy** » Sat Jan 29, 2005 2:06 am

That's good. Real good. I'd watch it if that's how it began. Just don't give me some crappy loud rap song and a bunch of punks in costume flashing hand symbols.

Dolewhite80 · Post by **Dolewhite80** » Wed May 18, 2005 12:16 am

A little late on this one, but nice.

Tantive7 · Post by **Tantive7** » Wed May 18, 2005 2:23 am

YYYYEEEAAAHHHHHH!!!!!.....
YYYYEEEAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!....
THAT'S THE MAN..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT'S THE MAN..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT'S THE MAN..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MY MAN AJAX..
DON'T HOLD ME BACK..
DON'T HOLD ME BACK!!!!
AJAX.......THE MAIN MAN..THE MAIN MAN...

AND WHO IS THIS YOUNG BUCK ??, KID?...WEARING A "W" LIKE HE EARNED IT HUH?? IT'S ALL GOOD, THE MAIN MAN WILL SCHOOL HIM,AND GIVE HIM HIS BEATINGS AND BEAT-DOWNS DUE!!! CAUSE THAT "W" IS NOT SOME FASHION STATEMENT?
YOU GOT'S TO EARN THAT..WHAT DO YOU KNOW ABOUT THE WARRIORS?
KID DOES NOT KNOW NOTHING...HE DOES NOT KNOW HOW DEEP THIS WARRIORS THING IS...

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Wed May 18, 2005 2:30 am

lolol yeah, i figured ajax was just 2 kool not to bring back somehow!!!

Tantive7 · Post by **Tantive7** » Wed May 18, 2005 2:53 am

YO..YO..YO..MUH MANS..

I KNOW YOU GONNA BLESS US WITH SOME MORE PAGES,
I HAVE TO KNOW?? YA KNOW?...

BIG-UP'S !!!! TO SOLDIERHEAVYMUSCLE
CHI-TOWN REPPIN HERE ON WARRIORSMOVIE.CO.UK

FROM
THE THRILLA FROM MANILA FROM N.Y.CEEEYAAAAAAA!!!

The Rogue · Post by **The Rogue** » Fri May 20, 2005 11:30 am

yo thats a preety cool begining u should definitly write up some more pages and post them up cause i know the remake aint gonna be worth it. it would be nice to see the warriors the way someon who knows it would make it

keep it up

Post by **SoldierHeavyMuscle** » Sat May 21, 2005 2:51 pm

want more????

BTW A.K.A the killer household appliance · Sat May 21, 2005 2:54 pm

whoa did you think that up by yourself!you should write scripts!

BTW A.K.A the killer household appliance · Sat May 21, 2005 2:54 pm

yes i do want more!

The Rogue · Post by **The Rogue** » Tue May 24, 2005 11:25 am

ya you should definitly write some more pages. i like your style, the way you describe it and such. where did you get the idea for the warriors to have W tattooed on them.

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