How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
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How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
The Warriors: How
Cleon Made it back to Coney
Chapter 1: A Lone Soldier.
Gunhill, 9:oo pm
April 14, 1979
1 night after the meeting
Inside the conclave we see the remains of the chaos that took place the night before. On the ground there is a single person. A man with a leather vest, on the back of it a skull with wings, above that a word that says?Warriors!
Cleon groaned and slowly got up and surveyed his surroundings. Then he remembered the events that took place the night before. How Cyrus was shot and he was blamed for it. ?I?m going to KILL that little creep? he said. He left the conclave through a hole in the fence? and came face to face with four cops, all armed with nightsticks. ?Freeze punk? yelled one. Cleon flipped him off in response.
They all charged Cleon, the first cop tried to swing at Cleon but he caught the cops hand in mid-swing and uppercut him in the chin. The cop flew three inches off the ground and hit the dirt hard. Another cop came up and was trying to hit Cleon. Cleon knew he had to work fast because there was another cop coming from behind him. So he grabbed the downed cops nightstick and before the cop could swing his stick and bust Cleon?s head he brought his own nightstick up and deflected the cops attack. Then he kicked the cop in the stomach, the cop doubled over and held his stomach. Cleon threw his nightstick at the cop that was coming behind him and hit the cop square in the forehead, the stick hit him with such force that the cop flipped in the air before coming crashing down on the pavement. The other cop had recovered and smacked Cleon in the back of the head with his nightstick.
He fell to the ground, the cop tried to hit him again but Cleon rolled out of the way, got on his feet, and slammed the cop up against a wall. He then delivered three swift punches to the cops chest, and then executing a roundhouse to the right side of the cops head knocking him out. The last cop tackled Cleon and they both ended up on the floor grappling each other. Thinking fast Cleon saw the cop that he?d wrecked before nightstick, he formulated a plan. He pushed the cop away from him, grabbed the nightstick, and bashed it against his head. The cop fell to the ground. Cleon kicked the cop so he was on his back, jumped into the air, and slammed both his feet on to the cops back nearly breaking his spine. Cleon looked around at his work, then he said ?That?s what you get when you mess with the Warriors?. He looked what the cops had on them and found, fifty bucks ? good for bribing bums he thought?, handcuffs, and handcuff keys. He picked up a nightstick and soldiered on.
Cleon Made it back to Coney
Chapter 1: A Lone Soldier.
Gunhill, 9:oo pm
April 14, 1979
1 night after the meeting
Inside the conclave we see the remains of the chaos that took place the night before. On the ground there is a single person. A man with a leather vest, on the back of it a skull with wings, above that a word that says?Warriors!
Cleon groaned and slowly got up and surveyed his surroundings. Then he remembered the events that took place the night before. How Cyrus was shot and he was blamed for it. ?I?m going to KILL that little creep? he said. He left the conclave through a hole in the fence? and came face to face with four cops, all armed with nightsticks. ?Freeze punk? yelled one. Cleon flipped him off in response.
They all charged Cleon, the first cop tried to swing at Cleon but he caught the cops hand in mid-swing and uppercut him in the chin. The cop flew three inches off the ground and hit the dirt hard. Another cop came up and was trying to hit Cleon. Cleon knew he had to work fast because there was another cop coming from behind him. So he grabbed the downed cops nightstick and before the cop could swing his stick and bust Cleon?s head he brought his own nightstick up and deflected the cops attack. Then he kicked the cop in the stomach, the cop doubled over and held his stomach. Cleon threw his nightstick at the cop that was coming behind him and hit the cop square in the forehead, the stick hit him with such force that the cop flipped in the air before coming crashing down on the pavement. The other cop had recovered and smacked Cleon in the back of the head with his nightstick.
He fell to the ground, the cop tried to hit him again but Cleon rolled out of the way, got on his feet, and slammed the cop up against a wall. He then delivered three swift punches to the cops chest, and then executing a roundhouse to the right side of the cops head knocking him out. The last cop tackled Cleon and they both ended up on the floor grappling each other. Thinking fast Cleon saw the cop that he?d wrecked before nightstick, he formulated a plan. He pushed the cop away from him, grabbed the nightstick, and bashed it against his head. The cop fell to the ground. Cleon kicked the cop so he was on his back, jumped into the air, and slammed both his feet on to the cops back nearly breaking his spine. Cleon looked around at his work, then he said ?That?s what you get when you mess with the Warriors?. He looked what the cops had on them and found, fifty bucks ? good for bribing bums he thought?, handcuffs, and handcuff keys. He picked up a nightstick and soldiered on.
Come on toys,try and get up,try and take on the King of The Warlords!!!!!!!!
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
i'm liking this! continue, please. 

Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
I agree with CleonWarlord you are a very good story writer and should continue. Like i said before nice story. 

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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
This is really great man
!! Go on, continue!!


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Chapter 2: A Warrior and the Bulls.
Cleon was walking on the sidewalk when bright lights came on and temporarily blinded him he heard sirens and saw more cops, except these were riot cops. ?This is the NYPD freeze kid? yelled one. Cleon counted eight cops, plus there were two in each of the three cop cars which made FOURTEEN cops. Faced with these odds Cleon did the only thing he could? he ran. The cops were soon in pursuit.
Cleon ran up a pair of stairs and saw that a cop had caught up with him. The cop swung his nightstick but Cleon ducked and avoided it and punched the cop in the chin sending the cop hurtling down the stairs, crashing into the other police. Cleon took off before the cops could figure out what happened. He ran another block before hopping on a trash can and jumping a fence. He ducked into a corner and heard the cops talking. ?Harrison, Garrison what are you doing here?? ?Where in charge of this man-hunt!? ? Shouldn?t you two be in Coney?? ?Weave been assigned this case.? said Garrison. ?That kid assaulted four officers and was identified by the Riffs as the shooter at Van Cortland park last night.?
?But your part of the Narcotics division? ?Yes but we?ve been after this kid for years? ?Why, does he have a drug abuse record?? ?No but he used to be part of a gang called the Destroyers, and they had a large stash of Heroin hidden somewhere in Coney, up until now we?ve never had a chance to bust him, but now we?ve got him for murder and assault? explained Garrison. ?Ok, so what do you want us to do?? asked a cop. ?Set up barriers on every street and the subway station, then radio every unite in Gunhill to be on the look out? answered Harrison.
?Stupid pigs? muttered Cleon. He knew that the cops would have the streets and Subway locked down. So he made a plan. He would cut through Gunhill to Pelham and catch a train there. He saw a gang burner on a wall that said Turnbull A.C.s. He went green, the A.C.s were a pretty heavy outfit (they say you gotta be six foot tall just to get in that gang) and he couldn?t bop threw all of them, so he had to be sneaky and not draw attention to himself he found a spray can he?d gotten off of Rembrandt, he smiled when he thought of how good the kid was, he invented the burner and he wasn?t even as close to being that good. He thought about all the other Warriors?his brothers. Vermin?s loyalty, Swan?s military like planning, Cowboy?s optimism, Ajax?s raw nerve, Snow?s quite manner which covered up how heavy he was, Cochese?s confidence which most people mistaked for stubbornness, and Fox?s parlaying skills. He was suddenly hit with a dark realization, what if they were all caught by the cops or wasted by the other gangs of new York. What if he never saw them again?. No, he left Swan in charge, he would get them back to Coney no sweat. So Cleon put the question out of his mind, if they did get wrecked he?d make it back to Coney and waste whatever punks attacked them?after he cleared the Warriors name. So he moved on, not knowing that he would find out the answer to his unasked question.
Cleon was moving threw the back alleys when he saw a Turnbull patrol, he quickly ducked behind a garbage can. ?So those Warrior pricks weren?t the ones who shot Cyrus?? asked an A.C. ?No it was some crazy freak called Luther from the Rogues? answered another one. ?Yeah well I?m still pissed off at them, they really messed up our rep?. Yeah well three of there soldiers got japed? said the biggest A.C. ?Really who, Warlord?? ?The Riffs took out their leader,( ?that?s what you think? thought Cleon) a cop threw one in front of a subway(?s***? ), and one got arrested by a cop( ?whose stupid enough to get arrested by a cop? thought Cleon) a girl cop( ?Ajax? thought Cleon as he mentally sighed and shook his head). ?Whose that little faggot? screamed one pointing to Cleon. ?So you wimps came back just to get your asses kicked ha? ?F*** you? said Cleon. ?Get him? The Turnbull squad charged him, Cleon took out his nightstick and waited for the first Turnbull got in range and then WHACK he broke the nightstick over his head. Another A.C. grabbed him while another picked up a board. Cleon brought both his feet up and kicked him in the stomach, sending him and his captor up against a wall. Cleon used his almighty elbows and slammed them into the Turnbull?s face causing the A.C. to bang his head on the wall. Two Turnbull?s left, Cleon went up to one punched him in the stomach, face, and finished him off with a roundhouse. The last A.C. hit Cleon in the head with a pipe. So Cleon jerked it out of his hands and smashed it against his face knocking him out. Cleon looked up at the Turnbull hangout and smiled devilishly. An our later when the A.C.s returned from their patrols the found a Warriors burner over their base, also they saw five wrecked A.C.s and their warlord next to their burning base.
Cleon was walking on the sidewalk when bright lights came on and temporarily blinded him he heard sirens and saw more cops, except these were riot cops. ?This is the NYPD freeze kid? yelled one. Cleon counted eight cops, plus there were two in each of the three cop cars which made FOURTEEN cops. Faced with these odds Cleon did the only thing he could? he ran. The cops were soon in pursuit.
Cleon ran up a pair of stairs and saw that a cop had caught up with him. The cop swung his nightstick but Cleon ducked and avoided it and punched the cop in the chin sending the cop hurtling down the stairs, crashing into the other police. Cleon took off before the cops could figure out what happened. He ran another block before hopping on a trash can and jumping a fence. He ducked into a corner and heard the cops talking. ?Harrison, Garrison what are you doing here?? ?Where in charge of this man-hunt!? ? Shouldn?t you two be in Coney?? ?Weave been assigned this case.? said Garrison. ?That kid assaulted four officers and was identified by the Riffs as the shooter at Van Cortland park last night.?
?But your part of the Narcotics division? ?Yes but we?ve been after this kid for years? ?Why, does he have a drug abuse record?? ?No but he used to be part of a gang called the Destroyers, and they had a large stash of Heroin hidden somewhere in Coney, up until now we?ve never had a chance to bust him, but now we?ve got him for murder and assault? explained Garrison. ?Ok, so what do you want us to do?? asked a cop. ?Set up barriers on every street and the subway station, then radio every unite in Gunhill to be on the look out? answered Harrison.
?Stupid pigs? muttered Cleon. He knew that the cops would have the streets and Subway locked down. So he made a plan. He would cut through Gunhill to Pelham and catch a train there. He saw a gang burner on a wall that said Turnbull A.C.s. He went green, the A.C.s were a pretty heavy outfit (they say you gotta be six foot tall just to get in that gang) and he couldn?t bop threw all of them, so he had to be sneaky and not draw attention to himself he found a spray can he?d gotten off of Rembrandt, he smiled when he thought of how good the kid was, he invented the burner and he wasn?t even as close to being that good. He thought about all the other Warriors?his brothers. Vermin?s loyalty, Swan?s military like planning, Cowboy?s optimism, Ajax?s raw nerve, Snow?s quite manner which covered up how heavy he was, Cochese?s confidence which most people mistaked for stubbornness, and Fox?s parlaying skills. He was suddenly hit with a dark realization, what if they were all caught by the cops or wasted by the other gangs of new York. What if he never saw them again?. No, he left Swan in charge, he would get them back to Coney no sweat. So Cleon put the question out of his mind, if they did get wrecked he?d make it back to Coney and waste whatever punks attacked them?after he cleared the Warriors name. So he moved on, not knowing that he would find out the answer to his unasked question.
Cleon was moving threw the back alleys when he saw a Turnbull patrol, he quickly ducked behind a garbage can. ?So those Warrior pricks weren?t the ones who shot Cyrus?? asked an A.C. ?No it was some crazy freak called Luther from the Rogues? answered another one. ?Yeah well I?m still pissed off at them, they really messed up our rep?. Yeah well three of there soldiers got japed? said the biggest A.C. ?Really who, Warlord?? ?The Riffs took out their leader,( ?that?s what you think? thought Cleon) a cop threw one in front of a subway(?s***? ), and one got arrested by a cop( ?whose stupid enough to get arrested by a cop? thought Cleon) a girl cop( ?Ajax? thought Cleon as he mentally sighed and shook his head). ?Whose that little faggot? screamed one pointing to Cleon. ?So you wimps came back just to get your asses kicked ha? ?F*** you? said Cleon. ?Get him? The Turnbull squad charged him, Cleon took out his nightstick and waited for the first Turnbull got in range and then WHACK he broke the nightstick over his head. Another A.C. grabbed him while another picked up a board. Cleon brought both his feet up and kicked him in the stomach, sending him and his captor up against a wall. Cleon used his almighty elbows and slammed them into the Turnbull?s face causing the A.C. to bang his head on the wall. Two Turnbull?s left, Cleon went up to one punched him in the stomach, face, and finished him off with a roundhouse. The last A.C. hit Cleon in the head with a pipe. So Cleon jerked it out of his hands and smashed it against his face knocking him out. Cleon looked up at the Turnbull hangout and smiled devilishly. An our later when the A.C.s returned from their patrols the found a Warriors burner over their base, also they saw five wrecked A.C.s and their warlord next to their burning base.
Come on toys,try and get up,try and take on the King of The Warlords!!!!!!!!
Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
This is the best fan fic i have heard you are one of the best writers here no doubt.
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
This is the best man
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
nice story man write more please.
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
^^^^^^^^^^
Umm... sorry to derail, but isn't that War Chief's sig that you have there? I'm not sure how the rules work, but can he do that?
To the writer, this is an awesome story. I can't wait for the next installment.
Umm... sorry to derail, but isn't that War Chief's sig that you have there? I'm not sure how the rules work, but can he do that?
To the writer, this is an awesome story. I can't wait for the next installment.
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Thanx for the reviews
unfortunately there something wrong with my microsoft word processor so I wont be able to post anything until tomrrow sorry 


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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
terrific story, youre a great writer
Ill shove that bat up your ass and turn you into a popsicle.
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
Sorry for not updating sone but I decided to take a brake from the Warriors for a while, but you can expect an update by tonight, also Warlord jp thanx for reminding me about the poll rules I forgot
, an secondly this story was inspired by Oxygens fanfic Cleon's Story thanx for the inspiration man 



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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
Great story.
Although you are making cleon seem Godly whooping 4 cops at one time and 5 ac's 


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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.
I don't think he's making him seem "godly" persay. We never really get to see him fight, and given how he's the head of the gang he must have some awesome moves.Swan Owns All wrote: Great story.Although you are making cleon seem Godly whooping 4 cops at one time and 5 ac's
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Also, looking forward to the update!