How Cleon Made it back to Coney.

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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.

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KingOfTheWarlords wrote: this story was inspired by Oxygens fanfic Cleon's Story thanx for the inspiration man ;)
haha,this is alot better thatn mine.I always made spelling mistakes and the sentenses never made sense! :lol:

anyway if you wan't some stuff,from my story that I never posted just pm me and I'll tell you about it  :mrgreen:
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                                          Chapter 3 A Warrior and the Moons.

Cleon had made it to Pelham trainyard, he looked up at a sign and it had a Moonrunners tag on it but on the Tag was a big V.C. Cleon new the Van Cortland Rangers didn't like the Moonrunners and Vice Versa. He decided to help the Moonrunners bop the V.C. Rangers of their turf mabey he could get permission to walk through their turf to the Pelham train station. It was worth a try, saw Cleon walked through their Turf and made his way to the Moonrunner hangout.

Before he got their he saw a Moonrunner patrol boppin with a V.C. Rangers warparty. Cleon went up to a V.C., grabbed his shirt and threw him to the ground he then grabbed his feet like he was a piniata stick and smacked him against a train window. He then pushed one up against a wall and delivered three punches to his chest, while the V.C. was on the ground Cleon kicked him in the groin, the chest, and finally slammed his foot on his head knocking him out. This distracted the other V.C. Rangers and gave the Moonrunners a chance to take the offensive. Soon all of the Van Cortland Rangers were on the ground knocked out. "Thanx for the help bro" said a Moonrunner that Cleon recogniced as Luna 51. "Your welcome" said Cleon" hey I want to meet with your Warlord, I think I can help you with your rat problem" "Well normaly I would't do that but since you helped us out back there alright" said Luna " the rest of you guys go hook up with Apollo and his crew i'll ketch up later"
                                                                End of
                                                                part 1
So tell me should I go on or stop here :).
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.

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This is great, just great  :mrgreen:  ;) !!
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                                      Chapter 3 A Warrior and the Moons
                                                                Part 2

Cleon and Luna had reached the Moonrunners hangout. Cleon walked up to the Moonrunner Warlord and talked to him. "So Luna tells me you want to help us out with the V.C. Rangers why?" asked the Moonrunner warlord. "I need to get to the Pelham train station heres the deal I help you Bop the Moonrunners off your turf and you give me a permit to walk through your turf" answered Cleon "All right, there are three V.C. Ranger Warparties on our turf, get rid of them and you've earned yourself a permit, my soilders will help you out where they can now get movin". "This guys pretty heavy warlord, i've seen him fight, he'll help us out" said Luna "Well I want you to go with him to make sure he makes it out okay". "Got it Warlord". 

Cleon spotted some V.C. Rangers farther down the yard, he sprinted full force towards them and tackled the group to the ground. One tryed to hit him with a pipe but he knocked it away with his foot and punched him in the stomach, face, and left cheek. One V.C. ran away while the other one looked at Cleon nervously. Cleon grabbed he and bashed his head against a wall.Cleon then climbed on top of some boxes, jumped off, and body slamed him(Cleon wins fatality bitch :twisted:). He then found the other V.C. picked up a pipe and hit him sqare in the nose knocking him out.

Another warparty came face to face with Cleon. He picked up his pipe, jabbed a V.C.'s stomach and bashed it against his head while he was doubled over. He then grabbed one punched in the face, elbowed him in the back of the head, and kicked him in the neck. The last one had his head bashed against a wall three times. Cleon soildered on.

Cleon saw that there was a moonrunners patrol and V.C. warparty all wrecked except one. He grabbed him and walked him over to some transit cops. "Yo guys this bastard stole my watch" He pulled off the V.C.'s watch as proof. "Come on punk your comin with us" said a cop to the V.C. "Your going to jail" "Nighty night remember to squeeze your butt cheeks tight" said Cleon to the V.C.

An hour later Cleon was at the Pelham train station saying good buy to Luna. "By the way man you need to change trains at tremont because of a fire from last night" "All right man see you" said Cleon. He was on the train for Tremont, he figured he'd just bop past any Orphans that gave him a hard time, he was soon asleep on the train.
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Thats all for to day guys tell me what you think :D
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Also if anyone has any ideas they'd like to contribute please pm me good night Boppers :)
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                                                        Chapter 4: Old friends Reunite.

Cleon woke up and discovered the train had stopped, he knew he was in Tremont. He saw an Orphans patrol patrol down the block 'time to have some fun' he thought. "Hiya orphans long time no see" said Cleon. "Holy sh** its the Warriors" said one Cleon recognised the little rat as Sully "Get im orphans" The Orphans all charged Cleon, one grabbed Cleon but he squermid out of his reach byelbowing him in the stomach. Cleon picked up a bottle waited for another Orphan to get close then WHAM he cracked the bottle over his head. Two more left Cleon used the broken bottle as a makeshift blade. He stabbed one Orphan in the stomach and then slit his throught. The last orphan tried to hit him with a board, but Cleon ducked and tackled the orphan to the ground and then he picked up his head and bashed against the gound three times before slaming his foot down on the Orphans head. Cleon found Sully on  a roof he picked him up by the collar of his shirt. "No no p-please" he said "Shutup"Cleon said"Now listen up your going to give me and my crew a perminent permit to walk through your turf you got that" "Ya-ya man anything just don't hurt me" Cleon thought about it and then said  "Boo" in Sully's face scaring him and making him fall off the roof into a dumpster. Soon there was a dump truck picking up the trash with Sully in it. Cleon calmly walked to the other station and looked up at the train schedule. Next stop Sheepshed Bay.                                                  End of part 1

I think Vermin/Cowboy knows how this chapter is gonna end. P.s. Thank swan_jax for the idea for this chapter adios boppers.
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It's a pretty good story. You got skillzzzzzzzz that Killzzzzzzzzzzzz!

what's your reading and writing grade? :lol:
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Yea, I think I do  ;) !!
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keep on writing.Your real good at that stuff. :mrgreen:
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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.

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terrific story keep writing man
Ill shove that bat up your ass and turn you into a popsicle.

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Re: How Cleon Made it back to Coney.

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One question: How is the next stop Sheepshead Bay? That's in Brooklyn northeast of Coney Island, not the Bronx. I assume you just made a mistake.

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your welcome man. great story.

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Chapter 3 Part 2: Old Friend Reunite.

Cleon walked out of the trainstation and into Sheepshed Bay, he hadn't walked five feet when a brick came crashing down next to him. "End of the line you little faggot" shouted a tall man with sunglasses Cleon recognised as Spider of the Satans Mothers. "Ya, end of the line" copied his fat stupid friend Tiny. The were both on the same Harley ready to run him down. Cleon then sprinted down the street at full speed, but he couldn't out run them so he ducked into the nearest building and ran up to the roof. He was soon face to face with Spider and Tiny. Cleon knew that as tough as he was he couldn't take BOTH Spider and Tiny. That was when something unexspected happened...  Snow and Vermin jumped out of the shadows in front of Cleon. "Leave him alone" said Snow. "Ya why don't you fight me meatheads" added Vermin. Tiny pulled out a club with barbwire on it, while Spider pulled out a meat cutting knife.

Tiny tried to hit Vermin with his club but Vermin ducked and and punched him in the stomach, he then grabbed Tiny's club and wreched it out of his hands. He then cracked it over Tiny's head but Tiny grabbed him by the throat and was about to throw him over the ledge when Cleon came over andhit him in the back of the head with a board. This allowed Vermin to make a swift blow to Tiny's balls. 'So thats why they call him "Tiny"' Vermin thought. Snow was handing Spider's ass to him, he tried to stabbed Snow but he reversed it and bashed his head up against a wall. He then kicked him so hard he flew off the roof down to the pavement below. "HA, i'm still alive you pricks" shouted Spider when the form of Tiny came flying oven the edge landing on top of him.

"I'm glad to see you guys, what were you doing here?" asked Cleon. "Uhh we heard you were in the area so we came to check it out" said Vermin lamely. "Oh I see" said Cleon "He met a girl didn't he" Cleon asked Snow. "Yep" "So I heard Ajax got arrested in Riverside, I think we should go get him and bust him out of there" said Cleon. "Alright but shouldn't we get the others" asked Snow. "No we don't want  to attract the Furies attention, if we go down there with an army there gonna think we're invading" answered Cleon. "All right lets go" said Vermin.

:D Thats the end of chapter three tell me what you think, thank Vermin/Cowboy for the idea. Also I decided to add Snow because of the next chapter and because he's one of my favorite Warriors ;).
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Dude, this is one of the best story's I've ever read. Keep going. Hopefully they can get Ajax!!
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