We are The Boppers

[greeny400]

The New Member

We are The Boppers, we come from Harlem. We are as smooth and as slick as the cold night air. On day we where talking when there was a knock at the door

BIG MOE- Yo Boxcar, go get me a beer and make it quick


BOXCAR- Sure Big Moe, u fat f*&k, why cant you get off your a$$ for a change


BIG MOE- What did you say to me kid, i didnt quite hear that?


(All of a sudden theres a knock at the door, so Tubbz goes to see who it is)


TUBBZ- Woah s*&t, who the f*&k are you?


UNKNOWN- I want to join your gang because your f*&%$g tough and my old gang through me out for beating the s*&t out of my Warlord


TUBBZ- Holy s&*t, wait a second. Ive seen you before, Arent you one of The Warriors.


AJAX- Yeah, im called Ajax and i was the toughest b*&%$d in Coney Island


TUBBZ- Hey Big Moe, we got a dude here from The Warriors wanting to join our gang, because he got thrown out of his other gang


AJAX- Also, i like what you wear and you always have chicks around you


BIG MOE- What the f*&k did you say? A Warrior? One of them c*&k suckers stole my hat


AJAX- Yeah that was Cochise, but hes a chicken s*&t


BIG MOE- No f*&%$g way, he looks a weak b*&%h anyway


AJAX- Oh yeah, you wanna see how i rumble, you f*&%$g wimp?


BIG MOE- Yeah I do wanna see how you fight, but you wont be fighting me and if i think you have got what it takes, maybe you can join


BOXCAR- So, are we taking him to The Dome to get initiated


BIG MOE- Yes, I think we are


(They all walk out)


So what do you think this is my first story

[Warriorsnest]

well for one thing. Stop the cussing. Its annoying and makes it not sound as good. So far its ok. Just stop the cussing. its also kind of weird what you did too. You picked Ajax to join the Boppers. He wouldnt have left the Warriors. And also him and Cochise were best friends. Its your fan fic and you write what you want but try to get some of the history right.

[trixter468]

Yeah man, pretty good so far, but like warriorsnest said, stop the cussing, and i highly doubt that Ajax would like the clothes the boppers wear, I just can't see him leaving the warriors and joining the boppers. But this is fanfic, so keep it up. Lots of people come and start fanfics and don't finish them, so be sure to finish this.

[Cowboy Is Cool]

I really don't mind all of the cursing. I mean, the gangs do curse like sailors, so I don't know what the big deal is. But, it's a good story, keep it up.

[greeny400]

Sorry, if you dont like the cussing and Ajax, should i start again and change The Boppers to The Warriors?

[StickWarrior]

Nope, your the fan writing a fan-fic. What ever you want goes. I do like you story so far and it is an interesting take on Ajax.

[greeny400]

And i wouldn't call Cochise and Ajax being friends "history" and you know what Ajax is like. He is a lone soldier and so if he gets annoyed with someone he will dam sure beat them down. Also, i wrote this because i feel it is different and if anyone doesn't like the way i write it, knowone is forcing you to read it. I also think he isnt bothered about the clothes they wear too much because he is more bothered about being with the chicks (as it says in the story) and i could see Ajax leaving The Warriors because in the film he never really is close to anyone and knowone is close with him. So, if you have to go from one gang to another, thats whats gonna happen. I will also go further into why Ajax got kicked out of The Warriors. 

[greeny400]

The Initiation


BIG MOE- Right, Boppers show him what you got


Ajax straight away runs at Tubbz and knees him in the stomach, but Boxcar comes from behind and smashes Aajx in the head with a plank of wood. Ajax falls into Tubbz and he is knocked out on the floor. Boxcar keeps kicking Ajax and Greenback comes into start hitting him with a bottle. Ajax starts twitching a little bit and then he opens his eyes. He looks really [bad word deleted] off and he shouts numerous swear words at them. He stands up and headbutts Boxcar and blood squirts out of his nose. Ajax then kicks Greenbacks shin so he falls over and then he stamps on his chest. TJ then runs in and tries to punch Ajax but he ducks and then elbows him in the back of the neck and quickly punches him as he falls to the floor. The next person that runs into The Dome is Donavan, a tough fighter almost with the same physique as Ajax. Donavan slowly walks towards Ajax tapping a lead pipe against his hand. Ajax quickly sees a knife out of the corner of his eye and runs to pick it up. Donavan also runs towards it, but Ajax  gets there first. He picks it up and in one smooth movement he jabs it into Donavans leg. Donavan screams in agony and falls to the floor.


(Everyone is rolling on the floor in pain and Ajax picks up Donavans hat and puts it on)


AJAX- Hey, am i a Bopper now?


BIG MOE- Yes, i think you are


(The injured get dragged out of The Dome)



What do you think? This was only a short fight scene

[greeny400]

Time for Destroying


BIG MOE- Wow, you really are [bad word deleted]ing tough. When you were knocked out, i thought you wouldnt get up. I was wrong and you should be proud to say that you're our first white recruit


(Ajax is changing into his new colours)


AJAX- Yeah, but i never stay down. Only wimps stay down


DONAVAN- Why you gotta be so violent man? (taping his leg up)


AJAX- Well you were the one with a [bad word deleted]ing lead pipe in your hand


DONAVAN- It was only to scare you, i wouldnt of hit you


AJAX- HA yeah right


(Just then a brick comes through the window of the club)


BIG MOE- HOLY S[bad word deleted], WHO THREW THAT!!


VIRGIL- Hey Boppers, we decided your our next gang we wanna wipe out


AJAX- Aw c[bad word deleted], its The Destroyers. My gang used to be rivals with these druggies


BIG MOE- Ok Ajax, its looks like your gonna have your first fight for the gang. Me and Ajax will handle this, you guys arent fit to fight


(Ajax and Big Moe walk outside)


VIRGIL- Hey look who it is, its The Warrior reject and look how hes dressed hahahaha


AJAX- Shut up you d[bad word deleted], or ill rip your drugged up head off


(Ajax runs straight at a Destroyer and cracks his skull by punching him on the top of his head. Big Moe picks up a brush and smashes it into the back of a Destroyers legs. Big Moe shouts "Sweeping up the trash." Ajax then runs towards a small Destroyer and knees him in his stomach and you can hear his ribs crack and one sticks out of his chest. Ajax snaps the rib out of the Destroyers chest and starts hitting people with it. Virgil is smoking in a corner and a Destroyer shouts for Virgils help. Virgil just laughs and says he wont help until Big Moe and Ajax come after him. Ajax does go after Virgil and chases him down an alley. Big Moe is on his own fighting about 20 Destroyers and he is beating everyone up. But a Destroyer sneaks behing him and hits him with a beer bottle that shatters on his head. Big Moe fades out and The Destroyers run towards where Ajax was last seen running after Virgil. Ajax is not far away and he can hear the Destroyers getting close. Virgil runs around a corner and Ajax follows, but he starts to feel dizzy. He think its the after affects of getting hit in the head with a plank of wood. He feels really sick and collapses. The last thing he remembers is being picked up and carried away by The Destroyers.)

[greeny400]

Wheres Ajax?


BOXCAR- Holy c[bad word deleted], Big Moe! Quick guys lets go help him!


(All the gang runs outside)


DONAVAN- Yo, Big Moe, get up man. Who did this to you?


BIG MOE- (Coughs) The Destroyers, a gang from Coney. Is Ajax OK?


NATE- Oh s[bad word deleted]! Wheres Ajax?


(An hour after that conversation Ajax is just waking up from being knocked out. It was dark and he couldnt see anything, but the shadow of something. He tried to stand up but he finds he is firmly tied to a chair. The lights flicker on and momentarily blinds him. Ajax opens his eyes and sees and unknown person. Ajax shouts who are you)


LOUIS- Im called Louis. What are you doing here?


AJAX- How do I know? I collapsed and a gang called The Destroyers brought me here, I think


LOUIS- Oh right, because im in The Destroyers or I was, but they wanted me to kill one of my own gang


AJAX- What the f[bad word deleted]. Kill one of your own gang?


LOUIS- Yeah, I know. I didnt say anything but i wasnt going to kill him


AJAX- So, are you gonna let me escape?


LOUIS- Maybe, but what gang are you in?


AJAX- Cant you tell! Im a Bopper


LOUIS- Ok, ill help you out, but we have to be quiet


AJAX- Anyway, what the hell are you doing here?


LOUIS- I came to get a weapon because i think The Destroyers  are gonna kill me


AJAX- Kill you? Why?


LOUIS- I think that they found out that i wasnt going to kill that guy...... I think the whole thing was a setup to see if i would kill him


AJAX- Anyway, help me out of these dam ropes


LOUIS- Ok, lets go. Take the ropes, they could help


(Louis picks up a knife and cuts Ajax out of the ropes. Ajax takes the rope and Louis takes the knife. They both walk outside.)

[greeny400]

Knowone really likes my story, so i might aswell not write anymore

[trixter468]

NO NO NO. I like it. C'mon man don't stop writing. I want to see at least one fanfic thats finished. I really like this story, please don't stop writing.

[MiddleMan07]

Knowone really likes my story, so i might aswell not write anymore

  What are you 8? Cry about it.

[trixter468]

Knowone really likes my story, so i might aswell not write anymore

  What are you 8? Cry about it.

Whats your problem?!?! Geeeez. No one is forcing you to read it. He was just seeing if there were people on here who liked his flic. Lay off. Hes a new member.

[StickWarrior]

Knowone really likes my story, so i might aswell not write anymore

  What are you 8? Cry about it.

Whats your problem?!?! Geeeez. No one is forcing you to read it. He was just seeing if there were people on here who liked his flic. Lay off. Hes a new member.

No, he should be able to take some critisim. If no one was reading his story he should change some things about it. You should be mature enough to handel this site and not going "boo-hoo" about every little thing. And it is no exucse to be a new member. We didn't get a break when we were new bloods.